10 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 12:32 am Title: Kevin
LOL @ the copious amounts of "Dude"! That is SO Kevin, though. Excellent job with him.
Date: June 11, 2007 06:06 pm Title: Kevin
Haha! Kevin! But I thought that Kevin though that every guy's fantasy was to go into the ladies' room. I guess once you've done that, you have to go on to the next fantasy! Although I think Kevin has it wrong again (I think "at one time" is the fantasy, not "in one day", but I could be wrong).
Funny chapter. I always like it when Kevin gets attention!
Date: June 11, 2007 05:42 pm Title: Kevin
Great story!
I love that you've used the "5 Times" framework but that the story flows.
Also, I love that Pam and I share a screen name! What does the 0421 stand for?
8 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2007 05:31 pm Title: Kevin
"Dude, did you do them both in one day?" You have everyone's voices down so well - Kevin was so Kevin, last chapter your Kelly was so in sync with the show's Kelly. Great job!
Date: June 11, 2007 04:24 pm Title: Kevin
Yes! I don't know how you did it, but this chapter is even better than the last. Party on!