10 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 12:35 am Title: Toby
I forgot to mention in the last chapter that I love Jim's IM handle. Hee!
Also, great job leading each chapter right into the next one. Can't wait to read Michael's!
Date: June 12, 2007 02:16 pm Title: Toby
I'm really enjoying this story! You've done a great job capturing secondary-characters (excellent work on Kelly!), and I look forward to the other two installments of the piece. Nice job!!
Date: June 12, 2007 08:17 am Title: Toby
is that last line forshadowing? boy i hope so! i can't wait to see how ridiculous Michael acts when he finds out. i heart this fic. just so you know :)
Date: June 11, 2007 08:57 pm Title: Toby
"At least it's not Michael." Haha. Famous last words. This is so clever. Am loving this so much!
And what makes it so good is how realistic it is. Everyone is perfectly in character!
Date: June 11, 2007 07:31 pm Title: Toby
So I guess Michael is next. THis is such a fun story!
10 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2007 07:06 pm Title: Toby
This is really fun. I could totally see it leaking out like this...
And I can't wait until Michael finds out...! ;-)
Date: June 11, 2007 06:21 pm Title: Toby
Aww, poor Toby! I can just see this whole thing snowballing. Painfully delicious!
Date: June 11, 2007 06:09 pm Title: Toby
Do I sense a little foreshadowing with that last line? Fun chapter. Poor sad-sack Toby. I always enjoy when Toby gets a little attention, too.
8 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2007 05:35 pm Title: Toby
I love that Pam referred to the HR form as "The Love Contract". Too funny. And how sad was poor Toby's reaction....