Date: June 14, 2007 06:54 am Title: The Office
I'm not a big fan of the "Karen is devastated by the breakup with Jim" theory, mostly because I really think she'll be relieved to be rid of his emo slackerness. However, Kelly could conceivably go completely ballistic on Ryan, and I am loving what you are doing with her campaign of revenge. The bit with Stanley is perfect, and now you have me hoping that Canon Kelly does something similar.
10 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 08:50 pm Title: The Office
This is going to be good. I love seeing a cocky ass get humbled. I also like how my girl Karen is done taking crap from Jim, Ryan, and Dunder Mifflin too. I'm assuming its only going to get worse since he hasn't even made it to Kelly yet. Keep this one rolling!
8 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 07:03 pm Title: The Office
I sure love to see Ryan eat it.
Date: June 13, 2007 06:53 pm Title: The Office
Wow, they don't teach you how to run like hell, and they don't teach you how to operate a toaster oven. It seems the only thing they do teach you in B-school is how to leapfrog over other employees who will make your life a living hell. Niiice.
Good chapter. The Karen-Dwight alliance against Jim and Pam is a nice touch.
At first, with Stanley, I thought, what the heck? But Kelly telling Stanley that Ryan yelled out Melissa's name? WOW! Dawesome.
Date: June 13, 2007 06:52 pm Title: The Office
I loved the way you have everyone in the office ready to kill Ryan. I'm sad for Jim and Pam, but thats just me and my love for Jim/Pam happily ever after stories. :) I definitely can't wait to see where this goes. :)
Author's Response: Jim and Pam are going to be just fine -- they're just going to have to work a lot harder in their prank war now that Dwight has re-armed!
Date: June 13, 2007 06:47 pm Title: The Office
I love the idea of Karen & Dwight in a real secret alliance... and Kelly also filtering some of that hate through the office as well. It looks like Ryan is in for some fresh hell from DM Scranton.
When Stanley grabbed Ryan by the neck I seriously laughed out loud. Great work!
9 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 06:46 pm Title: The Office
I really like the Dwight-Karen pranking team and I think you should consider making that a separate story. If only Ryan would stop being a cocky a$$, I might start to feel sorry for him for the multi-phase attack he appears to be under. I think you are writing him very well. Please continue.
Date: June 13, 2007 06:36 pm Title: The Office
Y'know...I had been kicking around writing a "Ryan as boss" story, but I've since given up. This is just too good!!
8 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 06:11 pm Title: The Office
Karen taking the guest chair out of Michael's office was hysterical! And her teaming up with Dwight as payback for Jim and Pam seemed very spot on.
Author's Response: I am so glad you commented on the chair. I love the sheer, unabashed pettiness of that gesture.