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Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2010 12:08 am Title: A Company's Suspicions

KAAAAAAAREN! I am coming to get you, you evil lady. I mean something less pleasant than lady, you choose. Damn I hate her!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2007 05:52 pm Title: A Company's Suspicions

Well, well, well, who could be behind this?  Ok, everyone, don't yell her name out loud...

Enjoying this immensely.



Author's Response:

If you say her name three times in front of a mirror in a dark bathroom... :D

So glad that you're enjoying it, really, honestly. I've been planning this one from the beginning, so I hope that it turns out as well as I envision it in my mind.

Thank you for the review!! 

 

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2007 02:02 pm Title: A Company's Suspicions

*sniff sniff*  I smell a  fish.

 And I was totally going to put dun dun dunn! in the end too! you read my mind.  :)

I love the slight change at the ending.  

I'm sitting here very scared I'll get another warning sometime soon ....... heh



Author's Response:

A fish or a...eh, I got nothing. :)

Hehe, unfortunately, I do not have any immediate warnings looming on the horizon...however, hopefully by the end of the weekend...
Really though, I have no idea how long the next chapter is going to end up being. It might be seriously long...or I might get another case of that crippling writers block I had last week. Who knows! Hopefully I'll feel ultra inspired at some point. :)

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2007 12:34 pm Title: A Company's Suspicions

Hmm... I smell Karen at work here....


Author's Response:

Heehee, she's an evil and sly lady now, isn't she??

But mayahps not as sly as she would hope to be... :) 

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2007 12:33 pm Title: A Company's Suspicions

If that Karen has anything to do with this...why I'll...

Sorry, I keep forgetting that this isn't real.  Nice developments here.  Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Hey, get as angry as you want! This stuff really does happen in real life sometimes!

I'm glad that you're enjoying what I have to offer so far. I'm hoping that the next chapter will be as great written out as it is in my mind. :) Thanks for your review!! 

Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2007 12:26 pm Title: A Company's Suspicions

Queue orchestral "DUN DUN DUNNNNNN!!!" and then some thunder and lightning.

Why do I have a bad feeling that Karen is somehow behind this?



Author's Response:

Haha, I should have been ambitious and looked for sound bytes of thunder and lightning as well. :)

Why do you have a bad feeling that Karen is behind this??? Well...I did say at some point that she was going to get her comeuppance... 

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