Date: July 05, 2007 12:51 am Title: Chapter 3
squeeeee. I'm grinning like a fool.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! :]
Date: July 04, 2007 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
Another great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: July 04, 2007 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
oh please, I happen to be a very soft rocker...hehe
this chapter is not that bad so quit yer whinin'!! :)
Author's Response: lol! I disagree, I think you rock rather loudly. lol, Thanks again!
10 [Report This]Date: July 04, 2007 06:49 am Title: Chapter 3
The first person format is fun to read when it's done well and you're doing a great job with it. Your take on Pam and her thoughts is very believable. My favorite line: That’s a stupid thought. Jim’s never at a loss for words; he just doesn’t know what to say sometimes
So yeah, really great work....the kind of story where I'll be excited when I see that it's updated.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! That was my favorite part, too. ;]
Date: July 04, 2007 05:40 am Title: Chapter 3
Soooo cute! I really love how you've captured the spirit of Jim and Pam and Pam's paranoia about everything. Those thoughts that run through her head are exactly how I imagine everything happening. Fantastic job done again!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You're maybe too kind, hehe!