Date: February 11, 2019 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 4
I know this came to something like a resolution and so might count as complete, but I want to say I love it and I want more (selfishly). It's a unique time to have Pam come to her senses about Roy, and I love that it isn't belabored with explanations of why--it is just done. I like what you've done so far and I thank you for it.
Date: August 02, 2007 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 4
I am so enjoying this story and I'm sorry that I don't review like I should. but this story is one that I check for updates everyday
Author's Response: Oh, that's okay, I'm glad you're at least enjoying it!
Date: July 30, 2007 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
so good, love pam's thoughts, I think it would be interesting to hear what Jim is thinking too!!! Very Good!
Author's Response: I know, I keep wanting to launch into Jim's thoughts, but I'm trying to keep it to Pam's POV! I might start alternating chapters or something, who knows. Thanks!
Date: July 29, 2007 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
What I wouldn't give to find a underwear-less Jim in my kitchen...
I don't necessarily think it's progressing slowly, but I'm very excited to see where you're going to go with this next! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I just worry that people get bored with just everyday stuff (though I suppose finding underwear-less Jim in the kitchen isn't exactly an everyday occurrence) when there's not a lot actually happening. My dialogue tends to be a little more like boring, everyday speech than part of the story. I try to avoid it, though! I'm glad to hear you're not tired of it :) And with these chapters I'm trying to flesh out Pam's situation and perspective a bit in order to make sense of the rest of the action.
Date: July 29, 2007 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
I have to say, I love the descriptions of his jeans--very distracting : ) I love the tension. A fine job.
Author's Response: A man in low jeans and no underpants is something I've definitely been distracted by before! Thanks :)
Date: July 11, 2007 06:58 am Title: Chapter 1
I am really enjoying your take on Pam leaving Roy. I especially like how well you've captured the awkwardness of everything. I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Awkwardness is my specialty, unfortunately.
Date: July 11, 2007 03:49 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to see where you take this. I'm a big fan of AU stories, especially ones where Pam leaves Roy earlier/PAm and Jim get together earlier/there are less plot devices keeping them apart, etc.
I think you're doing a good job of showing how confused/desperately-trying-not-to-think Pam would be in this situation. Update soon, please!
Author's Response: Yes, I like them too! I forgot to respond to reviews the first time around, so this is late, but thanks! And I have updated ;)
Date: July 08, 2007 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked it. :) But I also really like AU stories where Pam comes the realization that Roy is wrong for her and leaves him in Season 2.
I like the start that you've gotten off to! I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I look forward to continuing it :) Another distraction from working... heh.