Reviews For Rash Decisions and Accidental Heartache
Reviewer: bnbrice Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2007 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
Date: July 30, 2007 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
so good, love pam's thoughts, I think it would be interesting to hear what Jim is thinking too!!! Very Good!
Author's Response: I know, I keep wanting to launch into Jim's thoughts, but I'm trying to keep it to Pam's POV! I might start alternating chapters or something, who knows. Thanks!
Reviewer: I Know This Much Is True Signed 
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Date: July 29, 2007 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
Author's Response: Yeah, I just worry that people get bored with just everyday stuff (though I suppose finding underwear-less Jim in the kitchen isn't exactly an everyday occurrence) when there's not a lot actually happening. My dialogue tends to be a little more like boring, everyday speech than part of the story. I try to avoid it, though! I'm glad to hear you're not tired of it :) And with these chapters I'm trying to flesh out Pam's situation and perspective a bit in order to make sense of the rest of the action.
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2007 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
What I wouldn't give to find a underwear-less Jim in my kitchen...
I don't necessarily think it's progressing slowly, but I'm very excited to see where you're going to go with this next! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I just worry that people get bored with just everyday stuff (though I suppose finding underwear-less Jim in the kitchen isn't exactly an everyday occurrence) when there's not a lot actually happening. My dialogue tends to be a little more like boring, everyday speech than part of the story. I try to avoid it, though! I'm glad to hear you're not tired of it :) And with these chapters I'm trying to flesh out Pam's situation and perspective a bit in order to make sense of the rest of the action.
Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2007 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
8 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2007 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
I have to say, I love the descriptions of his jeans--very distracting : ) I love the tension. A fine job.
Author's Response: A man in low jeans and no underpants is something I've definitely been distracted by before! Thanks :)