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Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2007 07:38 am Title: One Hand and My Pocket

oh. my.  beruco with the toys.  Can I tell you how freaking *hot* Jim-with-something-to-prove is?

And I have a present for you:

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y254/lisahoo/office/smutcake.gif 



Author's Response: Um. You could tell me, but it would be a moot point because OMG I KNOW!

Also: Yum! THX!

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2007 07:06 am Title: One Hand and My Pocket

Yeah, you're really good at these types of stories.  I really should stop reading them at work.  I will be very eagerly awaiting the second chapter.

Author's Response: Hee. I may eventually write something that doesn't have a warning for Adult Content before you proceed to the story. Maybe.

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2007 05:21 am Title: One Hand and My Pocket

That was hot!  Jim will get the job done!

Author's Response: Absolutely he will. He's nothing if not dedicated.

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2007 01:42 am Title: One Hand and My Pocket

Tasteful smut is always the best. Great job. That could be a oneshot, but lucky for us you seem to have another chapter planned. Can't wait.

Author's Response: Tasteful smut...tasty smut. SMUTCAKE DELIVERED.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2007 11:58 pm Title: One Hand and My Pocket

Um...have lisahoo make you a smut-queen crown.  I think you've earned it.

Yikes. 



Author's Response: Aw, Kev. I do try.

Reviewer: banana slings Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2007 11:33 pm Title: One Hand and My Pocket

Well beta'd/ineptly beta'd makes no difference. It's hot, and I love it. Somehow you make the smut...something more than smut. It has substance. Kudos.



Author's Response: Thank you! That is certainly a fine compliment.

Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2007 09:04 pm Title: One Hand and My Pocket

Man, that's rough for Jim. Poor guy. But as always, I love your writing.

Author's Response: Awh. Thanks. :)

Reviewer: I Know This Much Is True Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2007 08:38 pm Title: One Hand and My Pocket

Hell! I would be happy if this was the only chapter! The promise of a second (or a plan of a second at least)...wow! Can't wait!!! :D


Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2007 08:17 pm Title: One Hand and My Pocket

Wow. The sex was hot - but I found myself wondering what happened to Jim opening the wine?  Maybe I better go read it again... after I Google "Pocket Rocket".

Author's Response: I often do a 'skipping to later' thing. Short attention span. :)

Author's Response: Also: there should be a break between them, but it's not allowing me to edit right now. So. Later.

Reviewer: BaraJam Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2007 07:57 pm Title: One Hand and My Pocket

You know I agree with you 100% on this. Jim does not seem to be the type of person to take Pam's inablility to oragsum during sex lying down (pun intended). He seems to be the type of man who would take the time to find out how to make the woamn he loves get the most out of sex. Which is why we all love him.

Author's Response: This is why we all love him. Among many, many other things.

Reviewer: sherlockelly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2007 07:51 pm Title: One Hand and My Pocket

djkfhdsajfhsadlkjfh!!!!

 bethany, you are the master. the sweet sweet smut master.



Author's Response: OMG NO YOU ARE!

P.S. THIS KIND OF GOES ALONG THE LINES OF OUR NEW IDEA. :D

Reviewer: collardgreens Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2007 07:48 pm Title: One Hand and My Pocket

yay one more chapter.


Author's Response: Ha. IMPATIENT.

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