Reviews For Sunny
Reviewer: bloody awful poet Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2007 04:00 pm Title: Off the Rails
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, original characters can be an iffy proposition; glad this worked for you!
Date: September 10, 2007 04:00 pm Title: Off the Rails
I really enjoy sunny's letters. I'm never a big fan of original characters but I really like her. and can i say creed is too funny:
Creed called me "Sunny" today. I'm pretty sure it was accidental.
too too funny!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, original characters can be an iffy proposition; glad this worked for you!
Reviewer: TV_Buffy Signed 
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Date: August 28, 2007 07:10 am Title: Off the Rails
Author's Response: Sorry to make you wait. Part of me wants this story to unfold in "real time", like The Office, but maybe I'm better off finishing it more quickly. Thanks for your feedback!
8 [Report This]Date: August 28, 2007 07:10 am Title: Off the Rails
Yay! Another chapter. I had given up. I'm glad Sunny had a setback, did make her seem more real.
Poor Sunny - I'm surprised seeing Dwangela in action didn't set her back again. But again, good characterization, even though we're not seeing the in action firsthand. You're doing a great job conveying what's going on, despite it coming through Sunny's eyes.
Looking forward to future chapters.
Author's Response: Sorry to make you wait. Part of me wants this story to unfold in "real time", like The Office, but maybe I'm better off finishing it more quickly. Thanks for your feedback!