8 [Report This]Date: April 23, 2010 07:06 pm Title: The Interruption
Good first date
Date: August 02, 2007 03:11 pm Title: The Interruption
I can only imagine how Pam felt when Jim said Karen, because MY heart sank.
But... it at least seems sort of positive, he is going to her art show.
Date: August 01, 2007 11:12 pm Title: The Interruption
Aw, what a sweet story. I love how after all this time they can still be so shy toward each other, it's very endearing. I love happy JAM stories and this is a great one!
Date: July 27, 2007 12:18 pm Title: The Interruption
Oh my gosh, you nearly gave me a heart attack with that call from Karen!!!! But then you made it all better with the rest... poor Pam to be freaking out like that. Love that he's going to finally go to her art show :) Can't wait to click "Next"!
Date: July 25, 2007 07:08 pm Title: The Interruption
Very nice please continue!
Author's Response: Don't worry -- there's more to come!
8 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2007 06:59 pm Title: The Interruption
"All her hopes for the past year -- well, it'd really been many years -- were encapsulated in that one "It's a date," and that was fading fast." As soon as I read it was Karen on the phone I got a little worried myself. Great line.
Author's Response: Don't be worried. I promise it'll get better.
Date: July 20, 2007 06:35 pm Title: The Interruption
Wow, great start. I am already committed to this story. I actually had a lump in my throat during the conversation in the breakroom. But in the end, "I'll see you at six" was a great way to finish. Great job, great job, great job!
Author's Response: Thanks, thanks, thanks! And don't worry -- there's more where that came from.
8 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2007 11:42 am Title: The Interruption
Loving all of this. Forearms!!! Yay! Banter! Double-yay! The return of the beloved Rubber Band Ball! Yay x 3! Can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: Love the yays! Thanks.
Date: July 20, 2007 11:03 am Title: The Interruption
I really like how this is starting. The conversation about the art show is especially good - the little nuances!
Pam's "What's up" in the break room reminded me of the parking lot talk in The Merger; it's the same sort of 'I know this isn't good' feeling from Pam.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the nuances.
Date: July 20, 2007 10:00 am Title: The Interruption
Oh, yay! I am so excited for this WIP. Liking it a lot so far... another art show is a fun spin to the first date fic.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it so far.
10 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2007 07:23 am Title: The Interruption
First of all: Yaay, you're back! Second of all, a Dwight bobble head and a dundie for you because you had Jim roll his sleeves up and expose the goods! :o)
I really like this - so like Pam to automatically assume the worst, and you capture the awkwardness between them so well. Love it that they got through it. And him whispering, "I'll see you at six"...? HOT.
On to the next chapter!
Author's Response: I get a Dwight bobblehead AND a Dundie for rolling up Jim's sleeves? Sweet.
Date: July 20, 2007 06:33 am Title: The Interruption
Really enjoying this one. I'm always happy when Jim's sleeves get rolled back up. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Because who doesn't love Jim's rolled-up sleeves? :)
Date: July 20, 2007 06:01 am Title: The Interruption
First of all, hooray for Jim getting back to normal and rolling his sleeves back up! I'm no forearm fetishist, but it's good to see some semblance of normalcy, ya know?
Also, I could totally see something like this happening on the show, and I think you handled it wonderfully. A brief moment of angst, but an invitation to her art show--accepted, this time!--made it all okay. Off to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: I can't believe how many of you like the rolled-up sleeves. That's so awesome!
Date: July 20, 2007 04:10 am Title: The Interruption
very nice. Please continue.
Author's Response: Ask and ye shall receive! [in other words, keep reading and I'll be posting even more!]
Date: July 20, 2007 12:32 am Title: The Interruption
Great Jim/Pam banter... so cute. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: July 20, 2007 12:20 am Title: The Interruption
So cute. I'm loving it. Fluff is fabulous!
Author's Response: Fluff is indeed good.