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Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2007 07:18 pm Title: Points of Interest

Oh, I love it.  It's great to get to see that introspection from both of them.  Really nice job.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2007 07:14 pm Title: Points of Interest

Haha. I love this story, but what made me laugh was that Pam thinks she will have plenty of time to get to know the Stamford employees. Shame they pretty much were dropping like flies.

Anyways, I really loved these short little bits explaining thoughts of those important moments. All really well written and just great. Really showing the way that S3 shaped those two

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2007 07:09 pm Title: Points of Interest

Loved this summary of Karen & Jim: It took all of 15 minutes for them to break up. It was almost as if they both knew it was coming but just didn't know when. 

The problem was he wasn't a better man...just a different one.

That sounds like a plausible description of how it could have happened that Jim is back in Scranton so quickly.  I hope you're right!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2007 06:37 pm Title: Points of Interest

More please! 

Reviewer: Abigail Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2007 06:37 pm Title: Points of Interest

That was amazing!  You absolutely got inside Jim and Pam's heads.  Especially with Beach Games and The Job.  You put into words exactly what I was thinking!

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2007 06:08 pm Title: Points of Interest

Loved the story.  Totally don't get the Wizard of Oz reference.  Please explain.  Nice work. 

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