Date: December 28, 2007 08:53 pm Title: CDs
i'm just grinning after reading this. really terrific-- the ending? blahhh i'm still smiling. great writing.
8 [Report This]Date: August 27, 2007 07:40 am Title: CDs
*braces for five chapters of angst* okay, not ready. *starts to read anyways*
:(. Its simple, and it happens. but its THEM. They have to be happy and perfect forever. ow dare you ruin it for them. *continues to read*
Date: July 30, 2007 06:32 am Title: CDs
YAY! A happy ending. Loved it!
Date: July 30, 2007 06:31 am Title: CDs
YAY! A happy ending. Loved it!
7 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2007 08:49 pm Title: CDs
"It's a little angsty, but give it a try :) " A little angsty? They're broken up! Seriously, I love these 5 things stories and this looks like it will be a good one. That was so sad that Pam was wondering what her Snapple must be thinking.
10 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2007 06:04 pm Title: CDs
So is this going to be completely separate events? 5 different AUs? Whatever you do I like this idea. Furthmore I really like that you didn't go into the 'why' of it all. I think leaving that up the reader really adds something to the story.
Date: July 25, 2007 11:36 am Title: CDs
awww howsad...hopefully by #5 they get back together...or perhaps we geta little more insight into why they broke up
Author's Response: You never know! Sorry to be vague, but I have to keep some mystery, right? :) Thanks for reading!
Date: July 25, 2007 10:26 am Title: CDs
I definitely think that this is gonna be hard to read, but i'm intrigued anyway. it must be that awesome writing of your's :) i really do love the thoughts going through her head with the box, and summer time, and the Snapple.
Author's Response: Well thanks! I appreciate you pushing through even with it being hard to read. Thanks for reading!
Date: July 25, 2007 06:44 am Title: CDs
That made me sad : (
Author's Response: I'm sorry! I hope you still liked it? Thanks for reading anyway!
Date: July 25, 2007 06:30 am Title: CDs
SWIFFER! What are you doing, making my heart hurt like this??!?! Not cool. :P
I'm kidding. Sort of. I agree with those who say that this is a really gutsy move to take, and a bold theme to explore. Especially when read in tandem with "Cliche." They make a very interesting counterpoint to each other.
Beyond the obvious discomfort of the story, I loved the "little" things about this chapter that rang so true: the fact that summertime is a bad time to break up; the thought of juice making her want to cry; the fact that she doesn't even hear her whole name before she shuts the door behind her.
Anyway, I know you'll do great things with this fic, as usual. 'Cause, y'know...you're just that way. :)
Date: July 25, 2007 05:50 am Title: CDs
Really enjoyed this - Pam's thoughts about the summer and Snapple felt spot on. It felt perfectly hurty. I'm looking forward to learning what happened! I kind of love Jim/Pam breakup stories, so thanks for writing one ;)
Author's Response: "Perfectly hurty" is what I was going for so thank you! :) Glad you felt Pam was in character, she's one of my favorites to write. Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2007 04:13 am Title: CDs
I'm so glad you're writing something like this. It's very original.
I hope we found out why they broke up in later chapters...
Author's Response: Thanks! I know it's not everyone's favorite subject, but sometimes they have to be written. Thanks again for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2007 11:15 pm Title: CDs
Wow, these are going ot be tough to read, but you're such a good writer, I'm confident you'll do a wonderful job.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Larry! Your support for Cliche meant so much to me, and I truly appreciate the support you have for this one too :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2007 10:43 pm Title: CDs
You ARE a bad person for breaking them up (not really) but I still wanna read more anymore. It'll be interesting to see what else they return, heh.
Author's Response: I know, I know, but I appreciate you giving it a shot! Thanks for reading!
Date: July 24, 2007 10:39 pm Title: CDs
Wow, that's ballsy of you. Keep it up.
Author's Response: I can always count on you, Alex, to appreciate the darker side of fandom ;) Thanks for reading!