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Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2007 07:43 am Title: A Scarf

Reading PLEASURE? Reading about them breaking up is pleasure? Warped mind you have there :D>.
Haha. I just wanted to do :D., but I hit the > keey by addicent, and that is a funny smily, so I left it.

Well, post break up, it doesn't seem like it would be the time to hang out at each others desks to just hang out. Messages is probably the only reason, at least for the first bit.

Hm... Allergies... can I blame allergies whenever I get teary eyed even at stupid things? like HAPPY Jim/Pam stories?

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26, 2007 08:01 am Title: A Scarf

I'm so sad!  I'm ruined over this breakup, I tell ya.  I'd sooner break up with my own boyfriend than see Jim and Pam break up!


Author's Response: Oh man, don't tell your boyfriend that!  Hehe thanks for reading!

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26, 2007 06:40 am Title: A Scarf

gah! this makes me so sad. i love it though. b/c it's still real, still them. will you ever answer the infamous ? of how they broke up? 

Author's Response: I might, I might not ;)  Stay tuned and thanks for reading!

Reviewer: missmargaret Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 11:57 pm Title: A Scarf

I'm really enjoying this series. It's definitely nothing like we've all been reading since the beginning of the summer! :) But really, you do such a wonderful job conveying Jim and Pam's emotions as they struggle with trying to let the other one go.

Break ups are so horrible. Let's just hope none of this ever happens to Jim and Pam in "real life"! haha

I can't wait for your next chapter!



Author's Response: Thanks so much!  Breakups are no fun but even these kids manage to make it fun to write.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: MelissaKrasinski Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 09:09 pm Title: A Scarf

Although John Travolta in drag is one of the best things to make you happy, this story is great. Making them get together in the end would make me even happier. <3

Author's Response: I take it that you've seen Hairspray!  Or at least plan on seeing.  Or at least seen previews.  Either way, I'm glad you agree :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 08:51 pm Title: A Scarf

They both seem so sad, I hope we learn what or who caused the break-up.

Author's Response: So much mystery, I know. Sorry about that.  Thanks for sticking with it though!

Reviewer: Laur815 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 08:10 pm Title: A Scarf

That's it?  Two chapters?  I was so hoping for more when I clicked on this story.  Granted, I know there are still more to come, but I was hoping to read all of them at once (I probably should have looked a bit harder at the story description).  Well done, and so gut wrenching.  Part of me really wants this story to end happy, and another part can totally imagine the fifth installment as their final "farewell" as a couple.  Whatever you do....it's going to hit me emotionally either way!

Author's Response: I actually did think about posting it all as one chapter, but the other parts are so much longer that it would have been quite lengthy.  So I decided to break it up.  Plus, it draws out the suspense.  I'm cruel, I know :)  Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 07:48 pm Title: A Scarf

I bet you he's thinking that the ability to give women orgasms just by looking at them would come in handy.  It's so much more straightforward than actually, y'know, talking...

Author's Response:

I definitely agree.  

Lol, thanks for reading Alex!

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 07:46 pm Title: A Scarf

I'm not sure if "pleasure" is the right way to describe this fic, but it's pretty damn good. Can't wait for more pain! Bring it on.

Author's Response: Haha, it's not very often you hear the words "Can't wait for more pain!".  Especially in fanfic :) Thanks for sticking with it!

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 07:33 pm Title: A Scarf

Well written, but a Jam breakup is tough to read! Please write some happy Jam next!

Author's Response: But there's plenty of happy Jam out there!  Gotta represent some of the darker stuff, you know?  Either way, thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 06:48 pm Title: A Scarf

aw....poor jim/pam.


Author's Response: I know, sorry about that :  Thanks for reading though!

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 06:40 pm Title: A Scarf

Screw the no 'why' comment in my last review.  WTF happened!  Very intrigued and looking forward to more. 

Author's Response: Haha, aww, but I like the mysteriousness of it all, don't you?  There's more to come :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Joni24 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 06:36 pm Title: A Scarf

Why?! Why do you have to break them up before we even get to see them together? Although it sucks to read them like this, this story is aaaamazing!

Author's Response: I'm sorry!  It was just an idea nagging at me that I had to write.  I'm glad you like the story though :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 06:19 pm Title: A Scarf

Awww.... poor Jim! Yes, strong men do indeed cry, but they're more likely to blame it on allergies. Brilliant observation, that.

As sad as this is...do I detect a hint that there may be something still between them??? (please?)

Excellent work, as usual! 



Author's Response:

Of course some dust flew into his eye.  Damn dusty office.

 and there might be something there...there might not.  Oh the mystery and intrigue!

Many thanks as always Mose :)

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