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Reviewer: waltisafox Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 17, 2007 07:29 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

i love love loved this! so in character with every person and i was laughing out loud.
i wish they wouldve posed though - woulda liked to see jims reaction to the pic ;)

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2007 05:41 am Title: Behind Closed Doors

its marked as complete yay!
*giggled* it makes me happy that Pam and Jim arrived together.

Such a cute little IM conversation.

Oh, Karen isn't a woman.... hmm... I bet Karen didn't know that!

Wow, a Playboy/DM crossover thing.... wow...

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2007 04:34 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

Wow...very interesting concept....I never would have guessed that's who Samantha is.  (I was thinking more, to try and get them to dress more fasionably or something).  While I hope they don't have the documentary actually show on the show soon, I love stories where it has because it's so different, but still the same, as the show.  I hope you understand what I mean by that.

Reviewer: GodInThisChilis Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 06:17 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

I am totally loving this...espcially the Angela / Meredith scene. Can't wait to see how Jim and Pam will resolve their issues.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, GITC!!  I can assure you that Jim and Pam do work things out - I'm incapable of any other type of resolution!!

Reviewer: Joni24 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2007 05:23 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

Aw, I feel for Jim but a part of me still wants Pam to take it all off! I'm sure she'll do the right thing!

Author's Response: It's just a matter if Pam lets the excitement (and all that money) go to her head or not.....  thanks for reading!

Reviewer: sharky Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2007 12:31 am Title: Behind Closed Doors

OMG! A Playboy spread? Mox, you rock my sox! Er...socks.

Author's Response:

hee - apparently more than socks will be rocked off in this story...  ;-)

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2007 10:50 am Title: Behind Closed Doors

Oh. My. God. I had NO idea you were going to go *there*. Wow. I was really enjoying this, too. I love the idea that they have to pretend to still be living the lives they had when the documentary last aired (on Bravo! Hee!) whenever they make public appearances. I love that Jim and Dwight, as The Boyfriends, were the ones that were most interested in what was going on. Even the "Samantha Something" joke. And then you go and lay THIS on me. Hooboy. Can't wait to see where you take it! ;-)

Author's Response: When I first read your review, I was worried that what you were saying was that you were enjoying UNTIL you discovered the ending.  Hopefully I can keep you entertained for the rest of it!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 26, 2007 11:08 am Title: Behind Closed Doors

Oooo...something tells me Jim's in for a surprise!  : )

Author's Response: Oh, Jim's got a crazy couple of days coming to him.....

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 26, 2007 02:04 am Title: Behind Closed Doors

Yay, it's another Moxie story. Go, Moxie, go!

Moxie. Moxini. The Moxinator. Moxarama. Moxalicious.

Really can't wait to see how this one plays out. I do wish there were some, uh, visual aids for the story, though.



Author's Response:

You have spent too much time watching old SNL episodes, my friend.  ;-)

and I do wish I could supply visuals, but Jenna won't return my calls. 

Reviewer: MaiaDawn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 09:25 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

I think this is an amazing concept for a story!  I am absolutely 100% intrigued as to where you are going to take it...

Author's Response: hey - thanks!  I hope I can provide a good story!  :-)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 09:11 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

This is perfect!!  So cute and so true to life with other Playboy spreads.  Wonder if Jan will be included - even though there's a big difference, make that 2 big differences, between S2 and S3 Jan!!

Author's Response: thanks, Kay - and yes, Jan will be making an appearance....  :-)

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 06:32 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

AWESOME!  What a brilliant idea.  How can they possibly talk Angela into this?  So many cool scenarios with this topic.  Way to go!

Author's Response: thanks - I hope I can do it justice!! 

Reviewer: Bailey08 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 05:32 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

Ha!

I love a good ensemble piece and this seems like it's going to be great.  



Author's Response: Thanks, Bailey - I hope it turns out well, too! 

Reviewer: Joni24 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 05:23 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

Wow! What a great idea! Although, I don't think Jim's going to be happy about his girlfriend showing off her goodies to the whole world!

Author's Response: You are an astute reader, Joni24!  ;-)  Thanks for reading and leaving a review!!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 04:40 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

Hee.  Cannot wait to see what is up with the documentary airing -- Bravo is the perfect home for it!  And I can't wait to see what is ahead for Pam & Jim, having to act like they're still 'just friends'.  Drama ahead!

Author's Response: Yes, couldn't resist the NBC connection. And you know me well - things will not be all well and good between our twosome.  I mean, what do you think Jim's first reaction to the news was?  (I'm pretty sure it would have been bleeped out....)

Reviewer: receptionist Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 04:20 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

...and they DIDN'T want Karen???


Author's Response: Well, I'm sure they would have been happy to include her - but in that reality, she's not been introduced into the documentary yet - it's only coming up to the end of what we know as season 2.  So no one would know who the hell she was.  Poor Karen.  ;-)

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 04:14 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

OMG! Haha, and not Karen. The women's reactions as they leave the conference room are spot-on!
What a great premise. I love that you started with Ryan and his wish to never have taken the job. Interesting.
You are a writing machine lately, Moxie. And I, for one, am loving it!

Author's Response:

thank you muchly, desert!  I know it sounds mean leaving Karen out, but there really is an acceptable reason for it in the story:  the documentary hasn't reached the point where Jim goes to stamford, so everyone would be like "Karen who??"  :-) 

I shall endeavor to keep you entertained.  Thanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: Zach Swafford Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 02:52 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

HAHA!!!  I wouldn't mind seeing Pam in an issue at some point...


Author's Response: Wouldn't we all, Zach?  (Okay, maybe Jim doesn't.....) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 02:38 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

This is brilliant.  Which makes sense because you, my friend, are brilliant!  I love, love, love that though Ryan is Micheal's boss, Dwight still says "Damn Temp".  I don't have to try very hard to hear Dwight still saying that very thing, come season 4.  I can't wait to read the rest of this :D

Author's Response: Thanks - I hope Dwight does that too.  You know he'll hate Ryan for backstabbing Michael, even if that's not really what happened!  thanks for reading!

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 01:36 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

Oh. My. Lord.
This is going to be good...

Author's Response: Oh, I hope so.  Thanks UrkelGrue!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 01:23 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

Oh no you didn't! Can't wait to see where this is going - interesting that this is happening while they have to keep their relationship under wraps. And Karen not counting as a woman?!? Gotta see what that's about. 

Author's Response: Oh yes I did!  :-)  Karen's exclusion is actually not a slight by anyone in that reality.  The show on tv in that universe is only in our season 2 - Karen and Scranton haven't been introduced yet.  Why would she be in the spread then?

Reviewer: kgreene Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 12:52 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

Wow... lol.. that's interesting. I must admit (and don't tell my wife I said this) but the notion of a naked Pam Beesly is... VERY interesting. : ) Also, I just wanted to tell you that I enjoy every story you write. I am stunned by your output. It's quite a bit and it's consistently great. Thanks!

Author's Response:

wow - thank you, kgreene!  I have been a bit busier than usual; I guess I'm trying to drown my stress in fanfic.  I'm so pleased you have enjoyed my fun.  I'd call it "work" but that sounds a bit pompous.  And let's face it - I'm in it for the fun.  

And I have to agree with you about a naked Pam Beesly.   I have a serious girl crush on our heroine.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 12:47 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

Wow!  That was a total surprise!  So funny!  Leave it to you and that glorious imagination, Moxie, to come up with such a novel idea : ) Can't wait to see where this is headed! 

Author's Response: Thank you, Nan - I hope I can live up to the hype!  :-)

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 12:20 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

That's a compliment just in case you aren't up on Masculine terms of affection from the 80's!

Author's Response: LOL - I'm afraid I am well acquainted with the 80s.  :-)

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 12:19 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors

You're a machine!

Author's Response: hehe - yeah, some people turn to alcohol or drugs.  For me it's Jim/Pam fanfic.  Thanks for being such a great reader/reviewer, batman!

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