Yes, there would be a Kevin giggle at that announcement wouldn't there be. I laughed just thinking about it. All the guys reactions were spot on.

It is interesting twist that Michael is opposed, but Toby supports. At first I was like, Really? But I sort of see it.

"and telling the women to take off all their clothes. That's my job.”" So michael!

I love Phyllis's reaction - so totally in character for her!

The new Pam IS 30% more unpredictable!

ew. having sex with dwight. see, that sort of thing isn't even on any list of mine, because i refuse to believe that that even exists. gross!

Oh poor, deluded Jim. Of course she's going to do it! Hee! I really love how you did this chapter. The talking heads are truly fantastic. This is just such a fun story idea; I'm very glad you finally decided to start writing it. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks - I originally pictured this as an episode, so it's so much more office/work based than what I usually write.  We'll get a bit inside Jim's mind, so at least that's different from the show.

The talking heads in this chapter are great, especially Michael's; made me laugh out loud.

I can't wait to see what happens.  I'm glad you explained why Karen wasn't included, I couldn't figure it out.

And what is our FNB going to decide?  Hmm...Jim obviously isn't thrilled about the possibility.

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While I was reading this chapter it reminded me of the "Clothes off our back" shot of JF in that magazine.  I could see Pam doing something that tasteful and beautiful. And I loved Pam's answer that marrying Roy was her #1 most unlikely thing. 

Well, Moxie, aren't you a saucy one!

 I love it!  I can hardly wait to see what Pam is going to do.

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I really like the concept behind this story.  I also like how it takes place after the show aired, but while the cameras are still rolling.   I'm also really glad that you made some of the characters contemplate their decision to do nor not to do this. 

My favorite part of this chapter is Phyllis's talking head.  It's short and sweet and it's totally how I would have imagined it.  Bobby just loves his Phyllis, doesn't he.  It's so cute. 

Mox, you are a force of nature. A national treasure. And this story is way too much fun...who doesn't love seeing Jim all nervous and uncomfortable? Something tells me he's going to find stuff to enjoy in this situation, despite himself. Lord knows, I'm enjoying it already!

Author's Response: Thanks, colette - It means a lot to entertain you.  :-)

Maxim is mostly articles, unless they've changed in the last couple of years since I've picked one up.  Only two or three real photo spreads throughout.  Heck, some of the articles are even readable, like the interview with legendary hockey enforcer Bob Probert.  And the American version doesn't even have actual nudity in it.

Author's Response: ah, you've found my one area of less than obsessive research; If you've some titles better suited, do let me know and I'll be happy to update.  Thanks!