Date: September 07, 2007 07:30 am Title: Hot Child in the City
It would be tough for Jim... wanting to support her, but not at all wanting her to do that. I don't think I would want that either (ya know.. if i was a guy... although as a girl, i am like, yeah, wouldn't do that no way no how)
"Nudity wasn't something that offended him, especially not hers." Haha! That made me laugh!
Toby would probably.... well, I could imagine he would want to see Pam in playboy, but then instantly feel guilty about it.
Wow, that is.... that is a lot of money. Holy crap! That is more than I paid for all FOUR years of college. WOW.
Date: August 15, 2007 04:52 pm Title: Hot Child in the City
Wow...this whole thing really leads to some uncomfortable coversations. I feel so bad for Jim because that would just be so...weird for him. I wonder what Jan will say...
Date: July 30, 2007 08:35 am Title: Hot Child in the City
Sorry if I gave you a heart-attack with the wording of my first comment. I just meant that I was already loving the story and then you managed to make it even better. Quite the trick. Heh.
I really like your use of Jim's apparent prudishness. We get bits of that in the show and it just fits perfectly here. Loved the Andy and Dwight exchange. But I'm most looking forward to the Jan ramifications. Yeehaw that's got potential! WHEE!
Author's Response:
thanks - I'm looking forward to Jan's reaction, too!
Date: July 29, 2007 09:30 pm Title: Hot Child in the City
Woah, Moxie, pulling out the big guns. That totally just upped the seriousness factor. I am really excited to see where you take this.
In addition to your always superb Jim and Pam voices, I really enjoyed the other characters here as well: Kelly was hilarious: 'I haven't told my parents, but they don't read Playboy anyway, so who cares, right?' Toby and Jim's conversation was really nice; I love their friendliness and frankness. And Schrute and Bernard! Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks - it's always so much harder writing ensemble pieces; I've got Jan and Michael to tackle next chapter!!
Date: July 29, 2007 08:16 pm Title: Hot Child in the City
Creepy Toby is so... so... eager.
Author's Response: How many copies of the issue do you think he'll end up buying??
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2007 12:58 pm Title: Hot Child in the City
Ha! Love the awkward scene with Toby. This is great. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Yeah, I expect we'll see some envious glances from toby headed Jim's way in s4! ;-)
Date: July 29, 2007 09:17 am Title: Hot Child in the City
I'm running out of things to say about your writing...Terrific! Smashing, Fantastic!
Author's Response:
As long as I know you like it, I don't care how repetitive you think you are getting. :-)
Thanks!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2007 07:00 am Title: Hot Child in the City
Poor Jim. He's trying so hard to be what he considers the "perfect" boyfriend. Apparently he still has a lot to learn about their lack of communication in the past, eh? Great job, Mox.
Author's Response:
Oh yes. He definitely has to learn that being the "perfect" boyfriend is not at all what it's about....
Thanks for the awesome editing skills....!!
Date: July 29, 2007 05:29 am Title: Hot Child in the City
Can I just tell you how much I love any scene with Dwight & Andy? Because I do.
And poor, tortured Jim. I bet we all thought that version of Jim would be gone once he hooked up with Pam, but no such luck, mister.
Author's Response:
Oh good - I was worried about that sounding right. But we definitely need more Dwandy in S4!!!
As for Jim.....if Jim would quit being all sensitive and noble once in a while, things might work a little better. I imagine having a perfect boyfriend would still get annoying after a while....
Date: July 29, 2007 03:49 am Title: Hot Child in the City
DON'T DO IT PAM! You've got a great relationship with Jim...don't do it!
:)
Author's Response:
Ah, another member of Team Jim (Team Keep Your Clothes On!) :-D
I'd like to think Pam has enough sense to do the right thing.....but....!
Date: July 29, 2007 12:58 am Title: Hot Child in the City
Ah Jim, what a pickle. I can't say that I don't agree with him. Spending years trying to envision things and then finally when he gets what he wants every guy in the US will be able to see. Yow, that's gotta hurt.
Author's Response:
Yes, it's definitely an unenviable position for Jim....but he could handle it a little better, too. Live and learn, I guess. :-)
Thanks for reading!