Date: April 16, 2008 08:26 pm Title: The Coup
I think this is where I left off; this one doesn't seem familiar to me. I think this one's great. I love how you get Karen (of all people) to update Jim on life in Scranton!
You don't need to worry, by the way, about responding to all of these. I'm just going to try to breeze through them, though, and I'll comment whenever I have something particular to say. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for coming back and finishing up the fic :) I like this chapter, I think it's a good indicator of things to come for Karen and Jim (he being in a haze while she basically guides the relationship).
Date: September 29, 2007 07:13 am Title: The Coup
I think it works, it fits really well into that episode, how they are talking, but they aren't 'together' yet. And yeah, Jan being alright with them playing Call of Duty - that always struck me as weird. Like, really?
Date: September 25, 2007 09:22 am Title: The Coup
'my apartment is remaining neutral in the war' Such a great Jim line. Very nice!
9 [Report This]Date: September 09, 2007 08:51 pm Title: The Coup
Aw, I really liked that cute interaction between Karen and Jim - definitely true to character ;)
Author's Response: Yeah, I gotta give Karen her due, she never was a "bad guy" it was a lot more complicated than that.
Date: September 09, 2007 07:04 pm Title: The Coup
It's amazing that Jim and Pam have chemistry on IM, but Karen and Jim do not. Nice work!
Author's Response: That's actually what I was going for, I'm so glad someone noticed, they're banter was always more buddy or maybe even brother sister than actually romantic.
Date: September 09, 2007 06:14 pm Title: The Coup
ooh -- nice way to work in the deleted scenes and the impending falling axe.
P.S. Ouch.
Author's Response: I have a feeling you'll be saying "ouch" for a while ;-)
Date: September 09, 2007 05:58 pm Title: The Coup
I like the reasoning for why it's okay for them to play video games...numbers and golf.
Author's Response: Hey, numbers and golf: it's how business is done.
Date: September 09, 2007 05:46 pm Title: The Coup
His apartment is remaining neutral! Great line
Author's Response: Hehe, I liked writing that line :-)