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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2008 08:43 pm Title: Traveling Salesmen

Jim realizes he needs to keep some distance.  His "that way I'll have it" is very smart, to not hurt her feelings or make it look like he's avoiding contact.  And you're thinking, "I don't even remember this fic!"  Don't worry, I don't expect you to remember all your little lines! :)

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2007 07:33 am Title: Traveling Salesmen

i like the way pam invites jim to see it, but he asks to just email it. yeah, not that i have ever done anything of the sort (looks away... who me....noooo)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2007 11:09 am Title: Traveling Salesmen

You're doing such a good job.  I really enjoy reading these.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2007 08:11 am Title: Traveling Salesmen

Excellent.  I like how you brought in a few elements from the show, and how Jim says just email it to me.  She's clearly a little disappointed by that, but we know that Jim doesn't want Karen to see any 'visiting Pam' action!  Very clever.

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2007 07:51 am Title: Traveling Salesmen

Oh, Jim, trying to make both Pam and Karen happy. Somehow I don't think it's going to work! This was a perfect place to have them IM!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2007 07:23 am Title: Traveling Salesmen

Yay for TS deleted scenes/NewPeat!!  "I was hoping that wasn't her new look"  Yikes.

Reviewer: PamWannaBe Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2007 05:02 am Title: Traveling Salesmen

I've been reading this story right along and I have to tell you it helps fill in a lot of blanks.  You've got the tone of the characters and it has the sound of their conversations.  Thank you for the story.  I check for updates every morning........

Reviewer: Swedge Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2007 12:32 am Title: Traveling Salesmen

Hah. Jim's keeping his distance. Poor guy feels like he's being watched, which he is.

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