10 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2008 12:07 pm Title: Our Family ties strangle people
This is such a great story. I especially loved this last chapter. It was such a great way to end it, and it even got me thinking that this would be a good way to end the show (when that sad sad day comes..) I look forward to more great stories from you!
Date: September 27, 2008 08:04 am Title: Our Family ties strangle people
I was so glad to see that this story is still being updated! You write the boys so well, and I love the dialogue you've created for them. The story about their grandfather's death was really finely done. Good job!
Date: July 03, 2008 03:25 pm Title: Our Family ties strangle people
Another wonderful chapter. I definitely still care about this story. I actually squealed when I saw it was updated!
Each one of your chapters is a little gem. I love seeing Jim and Pam as parents and all of their qualities showing up in Ben and Jon.
Looking forward to more!
Date: October 20, 2007 09:06 am Title: Our Family ties strangle people
This is awesome! I really loved the chapter of this that you posted on the boards, but I haven't had time to catch up on it since then, so I'm really looking forward to seeing what you've done with the rest of it!
I just love the interaction between Jim and his sons and I love that Pam gets it but doesn't always get it at the same time. Her characterization is great. So is Jim's actually. And it's weird to think of them as being this old, but I like that they haven't really changed that much; they're just older, parental versions of themselves.
Date: October 13, 2007 03:21 pm Title: Our Family ties strangle people
Congrats! You're story has been so hilarious I finally stopped lurking and am now posting! I love Jon and Ben - as well as all the other Office kids. The Shurte boys and Kelly's daughter are spot on perfect!
Please write more about Ben and couch "red blotch"'s step-daughter!
7 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2007 03:53 pm Title: Our Family ties strangle people
"And it doesn't make it easier for me when I go to his house and his dad has to run a security wand over me because he thinks YOU planted a bomb on me. Then his mom always threatens to cut my hair." This story is proof positive that acorns don't fall far from the tree...very cute! Jon sounds like the spitting image of Jim.
Date: August 13, 2007 09:05 am Title: Our Family ties strangle people
Great story! Would looove some more intimate JAM moments or something, but I love reading about the kids too.
Date: August 06, 2007 09:17 pm Title: Our Family ties strangle people
This was delightful!
Will there be more Halpert boys hijinks? I'd like to read more about Ben. Is he more like his mother?
10 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2007 04:38 pm Title: Our Family ties strangle people
That was soo cute!! I loved that Jon sold his brother on Ebay and Jim just laughed at him. And I loved how mad Pam got. Great Story!!!
Date: August 05, 2007 08:38 pm Title: Our Family ties strangle people
that was hilarious... loved it!
Date: August 05, 2007 05:06 pm Title: Our Family ties strangle people
This is awesome! These boys are great! I am so excited to read more.
Love that Jon is so much like Jim and I can't wait to learn more about Ben.
Haha, and DJ? Too funny!
Date: August 05, 2007 04:55 pm Title: Our Family ties strangle people
This had me really laughing. eBay? I love how excited Jon is about the hits he got on Craigs List. Please add more!
Date: August 05, 2007 04:54 pm Title: Our Family ties strangle people
DJ Schrute -- too funny.
Date: August 05, 2007 04:34 pm Title: Our Family ties strangle people
This is fantastic! You have to write more! :)