Date: April 12, 2008 05:35 pm Title: Confrontation is my middle name, actually its Berkley, but whatever
I was so happy to see this story updated!
That conversation between Jim, Pam and Roy was fabulous. I love how they worked as a team.
Looking forward to more!
Date: April 12, 2008 06:45 am Title: Confrontation is my middle name, actually its Berkley, but whatever
so good...i think for the most part you got the teenage boy perspective down...can't wait for more!!
10 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2008 09:40 pm Title: Confrontation is my middle name, actually its Berkley, but whatever
Yay! So glad to see this back! I really liked the way the confrontation was written and how Jim and Pam stood firm as parents, civil, and played no games. I also loved Jim catching the boys and calling them Shaggy and Scooby. The whole dynamic you have with all of them is really well done. Always looking forward to more.
Date: April 11, 2008 04:29 pm Title: Confrontation is my middle name, actually its Berkley, but whatever
Roy sux, I love cool Jim, putting red blotch in his place.
9 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2008 02:15 pm Title: Confrontation is my middle name, actually its Berkley, but whatever
Oh, I'm so glad you've updated this story! I'm cracking up while doing a quick read of this latest chapter. I'm going to go back and read the whole thing again. You write the teens so well!