Date: June 23, 2008 01:28 am Title: Act like it's the best meatloaf you ever tasted...
aww. That was so sad. I actually found myself hoping it was just some funny mistake when they got into the car and then I thought "I bet that's what they're thinking too." Great work. Too bad it ended on such a sad note though. Great story overall!
10 [Report This]Date: June 19, 2008 01:34 pm Title: Act like it's the best meatloaf you ever tasted...
I just read this whole story in one sitting. I started it and couldn't stop. Nice work, very well written.
Date: June 12, 2008 06:22 pm Title: Act like it's the best meatloaf you ever tasted...
I was just thinking about this story earlier and did a little squeal when I saw it was updated. I really love how great Jim and Pam are when it comes to their children and it's so easy to see their personalities in their sons. I really hope you come up with more soon.
Date: June 12, 2008 05:15 pm Title: Act like it's the best meatloaf you ever tasted...
Your story gives me the biggest grin! It is so much fun seeing Jim and Pam: The Next Generation frolic in teenagehood.
This chapter was really moving and it was very well written. The boys quietly dealing with their grief in their uncle's room was a nice touch.
Oh, and Jon diffusing the situation with humour? Perfect.
Can't wait for more of the Halpert Boys!
Date: June 12, 2008 04:54 pm Title: Act like it's the best meatloaf you ever tasted...
Nice job with a tough issue to write about. Love how it brought the teens closer to their parents. It's a maturing experience, for sure, even thought it's extremely uncomfortable to go through. Not surprising to see Roy there as well, given his history with the family. I really liked the end with Jon contemplating his own parents' mortality and not being afraid to discuss those fears with Jim.
Date: June 12, 2008 03:48 pm Title: Act like it's the best meatloaf you ever tasted...
aww...loved mose at the beginning...so sad and emotional, but amazing...can't wait for another update