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Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2007 10:27 am Title: The Role Model

I'm not usually a fan of AU, but this is cracking me up! Great work!

Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2007 08:36 am Title: The Role Model

Aww, Jim and Pam are doing so well! Considering how much we all love their interactions on the show, I think a radio show with them chatting together would be *very* popular. But, uh oh, with the other board operators! Here comes treble...

Author's Response: Here comes treble indeed :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 08:33 pm Title: The Role Model

You are mean! What a horrible place to end!
I am just loving the relationship unfolding between Jim and Pam, with the station as a backdrop and all of the other personalities poking their heads into the story. Dwight is always fun. Loved him here and Pam's interruption.
Really great work!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading!  I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 07:51 pm Title: The Role Model

Oh, come on. I do not give Michael permission to demote Pam. If that happens, Jim leaves, yes? And then they can get it on because they don't have they don't have the same job, or they don't work in the same workplace, therefore not breaking a gazillion rules. 

I love what we see in this chapter, by the way - the camaraderie, the easy banter with the underlying flirting tone - Jim/Pam, definitely.  



Author's Response: Aww, thanks :)  I'm glad you think that it rings true to the characters.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: faceglow Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 06:43 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

I find it hard to tell you off because you gave a little delicious hint of flirting. Cannot wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 06:30 pm Title: The Role Model

No!  Loved it, loved it, loved!  The transition from the office we all know and love to radio is seamless.  I love this so much, I want to marry it! 

Author's Response: I think you should know it a little better before you make that commitment ;)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 06:13 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

So this is pretty much awesome, love the pace and it's hilarious.  But then, I do love your comedy - for instance the Food Network loving drill sargent and "What in the name of Rachel Rey!" (Is that how you spell her last name?)  Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!  And thanks for reading my other stories as well, that's so awesome!  Thanks for reading and stay tuned!

Reviewer: Stablergirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 05:59 pm Title: The Role Model

Uh...this is me telling you off. Love this story.  Can't wait for more.  PLEASE calm my fears about this cliff hanger soon...

Author's Response: Wow, you should tell me off more often :)  Thanks for reading!

Author's Response: Wow, you should tell me off more often :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 05:42 pm Title: The Role Model

Duh, duh, dunnnhhh!  DCMP is starting a revolution!  I can totally picture this interchange, BTW.  Poor Jim, waiting for the right time.  We know how that works out, don't we?

Author's Response:

Yeah that boy needs a lesson in "carpe diem" if you ask me :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: House Calls Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 05:14 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

Loving this story, Wendy Blue!  I finally registered here just so I could comment on it.  It's AU, but you've done a great job of capturing the key parts of these transplanted Dunder-Mifflinites, but you've changed it up enough to not make it predictable. 

Author's Response: Wow, I'm so flattered that you would go to that trouble just to review :)  I'm so glad you're enjoying this, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 04:55 pm Title: The Role Model

Hey, happy warm and squishy JAM with a side of angst makes for a tasty meal! :) Love where you're going with this, and I love that Pam is unwittingly leading the board operator revolution! Excellent work, as always! You've won your time slot!

Author's Response: Yay for late author responses! Yada yada yada, thanks for everything, you rock, yada yada yada ;)

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2007 10:29 am Title: The Ultimatum

That was a great last line by Andy. So him.
And Jim pushing Pam to strive for more is spot on. Awww, they would be great together!
Loving this more and more with each chapter... so glad I started reading it... and cannot wait for an update!

Author's Response: Andy just struck me as the kind of guy that would have Blockbuster late fees :-P  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2007 10:06 am Title: A Word of Advice

I LOVE this story! I don't know why I am only discovering it now. But Dr. Todd is awesomely bad and Pam's advice was so great and Jim is so cute (of course), and the whole radio station thing is just perfect and so fun. I am SO enjoying this!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking it!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2007 10:00 am Title: Concentration

I love your little details - especially your snippets of Creed and Angela's shows.

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks!  It's so much fun writing those two.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2007 11:55 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

Oooh! What a fun concept! I just found this and am so excited about it, and looking forward to reading all the chapters you have done.
All of their jobs at the station seem so perfect for them. And I just love the continuity, but in a new and very different setting.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for finding this and extra thanks for reading!

Reviewer: stampsgal Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2007 08:00 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

I wasn't sure what to expect when I saw the premise for this story, but I'm hooked!  You've transplanted our favorite people into a completely new setting, and it works great.  You've done a great job with the character voices here.  Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading, I really appreciate it :)

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2007 06:22 pm Title: A Word of Advice

"I'm not done. Unfortunately, those phone lines are quieter than a woman having sex with Toby."

Wow is right.



Author's Response:

Haha, the joke had to be made. 

 Thanks for reading, Wert!

Reviewer: oobadnama Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2007 01:29 pm Title: The Ultimatum

I am really enjoying this story. It's so well written and you've taken the characters we all know and love and put them in an incredibly different setting but it works great. I love it. Awesome job.



Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm glad you're enjoying it :)

Reviewer: collardgreens Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2007 01:13 pm Title: The Ultimatum

awesome

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Stablergirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2007 05:50 pm Title: The Ultimatum

this story rocks my socks.  keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2007 08:57 am Title: The Big Guns From Philly

Makes me happy : )

Author's Response: Yay!  I'm glad :)

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2007 08:57 am Title: The Ultimatum

Oh my gosh, this is just too cute for words! What a perfect way for Pam to finally get some confidence! Mmm, dating in the workplace sounds pretty good to me...

Author's Response: Thanks sudzy!  And I agree, if there were more Jim Halperts in the world, dating in the workplace would be a very good thing :)

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2007 08:19 am Title: The Ultimatum

Yay! Pam obviously needed that tough love. And I love Andy in this chapter - for his complete goofiness in the beginning with Ryan, and for coming through in the end.

Author's Response: Thanks Semby!  Andy's a fun one to write :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: rakerpation Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2007 07:18 am Title: The Ultimatum

this is still really cute.  i was excited when i saw there was an update this morning before i went into work!  keep going!

Author's Response: I will! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Shassafrass Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2007 06:58 am Title: The Ultimatum

I pretty much want this to continue forever. I'm probably dating myself here, but I always really loved "WKRP in CIncinatti..."

Author's Response: I saw that show!....once.  I don't know if I can continue it forever but there's plenty more to come :)  Thanks for reading!

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