Date: October 16, 2007 10:39 am Title: Chapter 7 - The Confrontation
I haven't been back on the fanfic site since it's been down and I was really happy to see this story was updated. I really enjoyed the first paper cut story too and now this one is really starting to get exciting. I like to think that Toby might be slightly evil so I like where you're taking this.
Date: September 17, 2007 11:24 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Film
A strange turn of events, but the suspense is building. I was wondering why there was so much Jim and Pam, but I see how it fits into the last paragraph. I love Jim's finally thought. I hope he is okay.
Date: September 12, 2007 07:58 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Film
OMG!!! talk about a cliffhanger! I´m in shock!
Ok, best line, I think ever... ¨I have never seen someone so inept and clueless, who actually made it to management¨... Genius!
oh, and I love the little bit of Jam-ness <O><->
Date: September 07, 2007 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The Investigation
don't go by the reviews....this story is awesome just like the first one. Kelly is so funny. I can totally see her reacting that way if something happened to her Ryan. Keep up the great story--can't wait for the update
Date: September 07, 2007 10:50 am Title: Chapter 5 - The Investigation
You know you can always count on me for a review. I think the story is great so far. I don't find it as suspenseful as the last mystery, but I'm sure that will come as the story continues. In the last story I felt scared for the office employees, now I'm just waiting to hear more.
Author's Response: I don't know, I think I just lost it in this one. I may have to have a murder attempt on someone or something. LOL
Date: August 31, 2007 07:04 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Interrogation
Still enjoying this and appreciated Kelly's interview in this chapter. Just on the borderline of insane and heartbroken.
My guesses always end up being obsolete, but Dwight, Angela, Andy, and Jan remain as my contenders. And since Angela was the killer in the last story, I'm thinking that wouldn't happen again, so...
Oh, I had one question. Where is the documentary crew? They didn't catch any of this? In the last story, it was after hours, but now, I'm surprised they didn't see any of this considering it was a regular work day.
Author's Response: The documentary crew soes not participate, they merely document. They didn't catch anything on the camera, or did they? They started filming at the beginning of the business day. Curious what the film the day before would show.
Date: August 31, 2007 05:46 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Interrogation
Loved the interviews. I think you got Meredith, Creed, and Kelly perfectly.
OK, I´m certain Ryan was not the intended victim here. We´ll see who detective Roberts leans towards now. I have my suspect, but I´m not saying who just yet... I want to see where you take this...
Date: August 16, 2007 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Paranoia
Dude, I LOVE your mysteries. And this time, I'm positive it was Phyllis. POSITIVE.
Author's Response: I promise I am going to continue this story soon, I have been tied up, not literally, but I stayed tuned.