Reviews For The Escape
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Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2007 08:58 am Title: The Escape

Such a cute image of Pam sitting on the kitchen floor.

This is such a different take, because most stories with Pam's mom have had Pam's mom supporting Jim, and not really convincing her it was just cold feet, so its a nice difference. Just really making Pam even more confused, which works well.

Also, I am a beta reader (sort of... new at it), however, I don't beta (or read) anything with over a moderate sexual content, which I think I saw you wrote some things like that, so... but if you want you can contact me via my profile.


Author's Response: thanks for your feedback. i started writing this before i'd seen "sexual harassment," so pam's mom was semi-formed in my mind already. i think seeing her didn't change things too much. like all folks, i think her mom only knows what pam tells her. with not all the cards on the table, i think she's going to feel a bit ambivalent about jim AND roy. so, all the women in the beesly house are confused.rni totally respect that you stay away from fics that are not your scene. i'll definitely email you about beta-ing, thanks!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 09:59 am Title: The Escape

I really like the Mama Beesley you've created here- she's funny and sarcastic and surprisingly into pop culture. Very nice take on the post-CN fallout.

Author's Response: Oh, thanks - I appreciate that. I wish we had seen more of her during 'Sexual Harrassment.' I figured that any woman who raised Pam would have to be quirky, funny, and pretty delightful. Glad you enjoyed!

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