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Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2007 07:36 am Title: Chapter 1

Burger King!  HA!  And DNR.  Very appropriate for Michael. Cannot wait for more  :o)


Author's Response: Hee!!!  I know right???  So glad you liked it!!!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2007 06:56 am Title: Chapter 1

You sneaky thing! This reads like a great ensemble episode - Dwight's attempting to be Pam's confederate, Michael as the Burger King (Wendy? Heee!), fun jeans, black jellybeans - god is truly in the details! This makes me excited to see some Jim/Michael (et. al.) interaction this season - so scant in S3, and I missed it almost as much as the outright JAM stuff; in many ways, that will signal Jim being back more than anything.  And like the best ensemble episodes, this is served up with enough tasty JAM condiment to enhance the zestiness. (Still grinning, just imagining Michael in his cape.) 

Author's Response:

I'm so excited to write this too.  And trust me - plenty more Jim/Michael banter to come.  I missed it too.  SO MUCH!  Hopefully the actual writers will write it for us this season. :) 

Thank you my dearest for your review.  Always a treat to get your take. :)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2007 06:42 am Title: Chapter 1

:)  This is even better than the earlier draft I had seen.  You rock.  I always enjoy it thoroughly when Michael thinks up a hare-brained scheme and Jim and Pam have a little bit of fun at his expense. :)  Can't wait to read more.  And I love the title.  This story was well worth the wait!

Author's Response: Well that is nice to hear!!   It is very fun to write.  I was struggling w/the title and then...bam. :) So glad you liked it.  More soon!

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2007 05:44 am Title: Chapter 1

I can see this whole thing in my mind like it's an actual episode.  Just brilliantly funny with perfect characterization.  A worthy 50th.   

Author's Response: Well then.  What more can I ask for? LOL!  Many thanks - as always.  :)

Reviewer: Snarkland Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2007 04:11 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh...that has got to be one of the FUNNIEST things I've ever read.  LOVED the Burger King (or is it Wendy?) part. 

I really loved the "Michael will be here in 10 minutes" and Jim saying, "Then I've got 9 minutes and 30 seconds to talk with you."  Pam + Jim = Jammy Love!

I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

THANKS!!  I know that I could do a straight ensemble piece but why when there is all this lovely jamminess. :)

So glad you liked it!  More soon!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2007 02:49 am Title: Chapter 1

very, very good - and so worth the wait!!!  Happy 50th!


Author's Response: Thanks Ms. Mox.  No way I'll catch up to you but I thought it was about time I posted something new. :)

Reviewer: false_palindrome Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2007 12:47 am Title: Chapter 1

bwahaha, your michael/jim back and forth is genius.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!  I love stories where I get to do this.  They are so fun to write.

Reviewer: tv_dream Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2007 12:18 am Title: Chapter 1

Hilarious. The Burger King bit is priceless...

Author's Response: Thank you so much tv_d.  I kept seeing those stupid commericals with the King in my mind and voila. :) Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

OH-MY-GOD. You could be a comedy MACHINE <Michael>. I'm in a hotel right now and I literally laughed so loud for so long at that Burger King line that I was pretty sure they were gonna call security on me. Oh SO GOOD Hugs!

Author's Response: Well it's appropriate that I was in a hotel when I posted this so there you go. :)   The Burger King part was my favoriest.  So glad you liked it!!!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hugs,

Congrats on your 50th fic, quite an accomplishment.  And I can tell this one is going to be great.  It sounds just like an actual episode, with "fun with Jim and Pam" thrown in.  Love it!



Author's Response: Aww thanks EH.  Highest compliment to say it sounds like an episode.  I hope it stays true for the rest of the story.  More to come soon!

Reviewer: uncgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

You know I adore this.  Obviously.  But I can't tell you how much I love the way you wrote Dwight and Pam here, I love that she keeps special candy for him.  Good characterization on the all around.  Great job, glad to see you posting! 

Author's Response: Thank you my dear - for everything.  And of course she does.  Pam's thoughtful like that.  :) 

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