Date: April 21, 2008 02:40 pm Title: Manure
Ah, the earthiest of love. :) Nicely done.
Author's Response: I wrote about poo. You read and left a review. ;)
Date: August 31, 2007 03:40 pm Title: Manure
I think this was the first poop story I've ever read! I was in Lancaster PA a few weeks ago and I can sure attest to the smell of the manure... but to touch it, ewwww.
Author's Response: Yeah - I don't know what has been going on with me lately, but poop is taking a central theme. And come on, it's Dwight. You think he doesn't touch the manure? thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: August 31, 2007 02:53 pm Title: Manure
I like this, and I get the Mose-attraction, but I had to read it about 4 times before I was (fairly) certain that the daughter of the manure seller is speaking, Farmer Schrute is Dwight and he's inspecting the manure, and Mose is the object of her affection standing behind Dwight. Actually 4 times, so maybe it's a little too subtle, or maybe I'm slow. (Or maybe both...)
How can we arrange it so you can write "Mose and the Manure-Seller's Daughter"? Arranged marriage? Buggy breakdown? Kidnapping? (/Jim)
Author's Response: Hmmm - I'm glad that you brought this up. I was trying hard to make sure it was understood that it was Mose, I didn't think of the other voices being that discombobulated.... Maybe I need to add a little something in there. Oh - and "Buggy breakdown"? Totally cracked me up... Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
9 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2007 05:27 am Title: Manure
Ghost Baby was previously the shittiest (poo filled) story I've read. Congratulations, you've just taken over that title. Ewwww, remnants clinging to his arm hair, ewwwww. Great job, and I loved chapter 1 also. Strangers always seem so much more mysterious than they really are.
Author's Response: Teehee - I'm glad you... enjoyed? I love the idea of Dwight as a farmer... thanks for reading and reviewing...