Date: April 21, 2008 02:48 pm Title: Go Tell it on the Mountain
I like the evocation of Angela's "silky blonde hair". I hadn't thought of it in quite that way. And there's a certain Jane Austen-ish quality about your minister (in a good way) I can't quite put my finger on, but I like him. Poor guy.
Author's Response: Thanks - I was actually surprised by this one - I originally wanted a choir boy to be the one with a crush on her, but this is how it worked out. The hair was my starting point for this piece, so I'm glad you picked up on that description.
8 [Report This]Date: February 11, 2008 07:53 pm Title: Go Tell it on the Mountain
This was beautifully written. I enjoyed the twist too, at least to me it was a twist as first I thought it was Andy, and then Dwight. But when I realized it was the priest I thought, duh! That's why it's called "unrequited"!
Author's Response: Oh wow - thank you so much! This chapter was bouncing around in my head since the beginning, I'm so happy you liked the way it came out! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review!
10 [Report This]Date: February 10, 2008 08:00 pm Title: Go Tell it on the Mountain
These are all marvelous. Every one a gem.
Author's Response: Thank you!