Date: March 10, 2008 07:46 pm Title: The Dimming of the Day
awwwww, fluffy banter. that just makes me melt.
and once again, the last line? my favorite :]
Author's Response:
Love this one, too. Thank you!!
Date: November 13, 2007 08:14 am Title: The Dimming of the Day
This is brilliant. Again I could see this scene so clearly which is amazing considering the chap is all dialogue. Brilliantly in character.
Author's Response: Well, I hope we've all had these moments, very late at night, after the sexage, when you just ramble all over the place with your partner, so I thought most readers would be able to relate to it pretty well. Thank you so much for the sweet words...I'm enjoying these all over again!
9 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2007 11:42 am Title: The Dimming of the Day
Brilliant! This is the best chapter in this series so far. Really like the dialogue/banter. Feels completely real.
Author's Response: Is there anything better to read than "feels completely real"? I don't think so! This was such a fun chapter to write, so thank you very much for the review!
9 [Report This]Date: September 22, 2007 08:19 pm Title: The Dimming of the Day
This chapter always makes me hungry :)
I can't remember if I reviewed this one or not, so I'm reviewing it now. I really love the way they are so comfortable in this. I like the mental picture you provide of them just sitting together in bed, talking. Great job!
(Now, I need some Mac & Cheese...)
Author's Response:
Jenn, thank you so much. It's crazy that there is only one chapter that doesn't have any food or drink in it at all. I'm better at food porn than . . . porn porn, I think. Glad you liked this one.
Date: September 16, 2007 11:46 pm Title: The Dimming of the Day
I love THIS STORY more than that! I enjoy these chapters SO MUCH SWEETPEA, I have to say this might have been my fave though! Just something about them being all snuggled up and just TALKING about anything and everything. Just being THEM. Perfect.
Author's Response: Awww! I'm all verklempt! Yeah, I love them just being together like this, too, and it was really fun to write. And I'm SO glad to see a new chapter from you! Thanks for being so generous with the reviews, LoveFool.
Date: September 16, 2007 11:10 am Title: The Dimming of the Day
Can these two be any cuter? These stories are so adorkable and lovely. Love the teasing between them.
Author's Response: No, EH, they can't get any cuter or my teeth are going to rot out! I loved letting Pam tease Jim for a change because he gives it to her so often. Thank you for the review.
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2007 11:07 am Title: The Dimming of the Day
Sigh. That was delicious. I could have kept on reading.
Author's Response: Okay, NanReg, that's good to know because I was like, wow, these two are so windy! Maybe they should shuuut ittt after 8 pages of yammering. Thank you so much.
Date: September 16, 2007 08:07 am Title: The Dimming of the Day
Wow! This was so great! Sometimes I have a hard time following the dialogue-only stories but you did such a good job making clear who was talking. When you said how they had a big conversation on May 18, I was like, ooh, can you do a chapter on that? But then you told us some of the good stuff anyways! Great job :-)
Author's Response: I have a hard time following sometimes, too, sudzy, so I'm really glad it was clear. mixedberryjam helped me so much with that. Please let Greg Daniels give us just one smidge of this kind of stuff this season and I will be ecstatic! Thank you so much for the sweet review.
Date: September 16, 2007 07:14 am Title: The Dimming of the Day
hehe, they're such nerds. In the best way of course.
I think the thought of Pam trying to do Ping and Jim doing Stanley.... So funny. And just how good you have the actions explained through their dialogue is great. And I love the right amount of funny, sweet, and serious you got going on, it rocks. Great job :)
Author's Response: Back atcha! Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2007 07:13 am Title: The Dimming of the Day
This is OUTSTANDING! You did a great job with this dialog only chapter. Impossible to pick a favorite line – it's all so good!
Author's Response: *blush* Thank you so much! It was very fun to write because I basically had to imagine being in bed with Jim after we, uh, you know. It was a chore, I'll admit, but it's just a small sacrifice to bring happiness to others. :)
Date: September 16, 2007 06:47 am Title: The Dimming of the Day
This is everything JAM pillow-talk should be: flirty, funny, intimate, sexy and most of all - oozing deep history and friendship. Love how you subtly let us know how they're touching (playing with her hair, squeezing her, his arm being asleep, etc.) Very, very nice.
Author's Response: I'm so glad their actions were evident - I was so worried about that and I was tempted to add narrative to make it really clear. Your reviews are always a great boost, Colette. I so appreciate it.
Date: September 16, 2007 06:38 am Title: The Dimming of the Day
Now THAT was comfort food! Happy, sappy, mushy, gushy JAM! Keep bringin' it!
Author's Response: Ha! It's so much easier to be silly and mushy in the dark. I love to think of them at this stage of their relationship. Thanks, Abigail!
Date: September 16, 2007 05:50 am Title: The Dimming of the Day
This worked beautifully, sweetpea. The flirty banter, the movie teasing, the 'best days', the way they just touch on some of the more serious stuff.
Dundie for sexiest line goes to this: “Hey, my tongue’s been pretty much all over you, Halpert! Now you have a problem with me licking your face?”
The 'awww' Dundie goes to this: “Because I’m so happy we can talk to each other now.”
Nicely done, SP!
Author's Response: I'm so glad this worked and I'm so glad you liked it, lisahoo. Thank you for all your nice comments.