Date: March 10, 2008 08:06 pm Title: Nothing in the World
awwwwww, first fight. (but it was hardly a fight.) and you already know how i feel about this whole story, so i think that's about all i have to say :]
Author's Response: This is a chapter that just wouldn't leave me alone and I'm not 100% happy with it, but it had it's moments. You're so sweet to have done this, Sunday.
Date: November 13, 2007 08:27 am Title: Nothing in the World
A very believable look at what their first fight could have been over. Excellent.
Author's Response:
We had some spoilers and a lot of speculation about a fight between Jim and Pam and this was borne out of those discussions. This just scratched an itch for me, wondering what they might fight about.
10 [Report This]Date: October 23, 2007 03:35 pm Title: Nothing in the World
Love this. You have such a talent for getting into their heads. Cheers.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you, expiredyogurt! This is my first hand at fanfic, so I really appreciate the review!
Date: October 14, 2007 07:41 pm Title: Nothing in the World
Yeah, I cannot wait for or imagine how this issue is going to play out. Nicely done, as usual sweetpea!
Author's Response: Thank you, lisahoo! It might not even BE an issue, but I can't imagine that Pam doesn't have just a smidge of guilt over Jim giving the job up to be with her. Thank you for the review.
Date: October 14, 2007 06:33 pm Title: Nothing in the World
Hey Miss Sweetpea, you deserve all your reads! I thoroughly enjoyed Jim and Pam's first fight! I can definitely see this being a point of contention if Jim has never told her this...one has to wonder if this will become an issue on the show...hmmm....
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you so much, LoveFool! I think this is probably only an issue in my mind and nothing that we'll ever really see. What probably happened was that Jim couldn't WAIT to tell Pam what he'd done and she was probably thrilled and flattered. Personally, I'd have a stroke if some guy did that for me, certain I'd never be able to measure up. But I'm not FNB, so there you go. Thank you for the review.
9 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2007 09:57 am Title: Nothing in the World
Just read the last 3 chapters. The way you capture the voices of Jim and Pam is amazingly real. Playful and moving.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, jinx! I'm glad we've seen them talking more, because I feel like I can take a few more liberties with dialogue, knowing that they're communicating beyond a few words and stammers. Thank you for the review!
Date: October 14, 2007 08:48 am Title: Nothing in the World
I love that last bit!! It made me smile and it's totally them. Lovely chapter sweetpea! Looking forward to more ;)
Author's Response: Ha! I really liked having Pam turn that around on him a little, but no way he's going to back down. Thanks so much for the review, WBJ!
Date: October 14, 2007 08:44 am Title: Nothing in the World
Glad you wrote this, sweetpea. Just perfect and very realistic that this would be their first fight. And that last line? Love it. *gigglesmort*
Another winner!
Author's Response:
You're the best, EH! There's so much stuff that we're never going to see and conversations that we're never going to hear, so, I guess we get to fill in the blanks however we see fit. Glad you liked it and thought it seemed real, and thank you for reviewing.