Date: February 26, 2008 12:18 am Title: Chapter 17: Carnival of Completion
Well this was a fun ride! Thanks for taking us along! I laughed out loud during this chapter when Michael asked if Maddie could go on the moon bounce and Pam said "she doesn't walk....or bounce." SO FREAKING FUNNY. Thanks for a good time!
Date: January 17, 2008 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 3: That Swirl means something
"And in the middle of that was the smallest little spot, where the computer had outlined, that held everything he ever wanted, right there. And he lightly touched the little spot in the picture, marveling at it, and promised he would do anything to keep it safe, happy, healthy, and loved."
That truly brought tears to my eyes. Such a sweet and tender moment.
Date: January 15, 2008 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 14: Arguments that make up sex can't fix
I love this story - I want more. Fan Fic's are the only thing that get me through the long weeks without my beloved show... when oh! when will they give the writers what they want and end this tragic strike?
Date: January 15, 2008 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 14: Arguments that make up sex can't fix
I'm not usually one for angst... but this was great to read that their relationship isn't all happy, but that they can forgive each other and move on. I also love that Pam signed him up for the class knowing he really wanted it.
Excellent chapter- can't wait for the debut of baby JAM!