Date: September 17, 2007 04:26 pm Title: Morning
Now I actually feel sorry for Ryan. *cries* But I love you for slipping that 'Bernard' in.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it!
Date: September 17, 2007 01:56 pm Title: Regret
OMG! Can't believe that I missed the Bernard the first time around!!! I guess it just looked natural to me. I hope you don't mind that I am now madly in love with you.
Author's Response: Heh, everyone seems to miss that on the first reading. Madly in love with me? I think I can live with it. :-)
Date: September 17, 2007 01:48 pm Title: Regret
Once again, absolutely brilliant. You captured Ryan's resistance to Kelly's love so perfectly in just a few words, and you managed to make me feel sorry for him, something that rarely happens for me! Beautiful writing. This is such a wonderful fic, I can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: Yeah, I think Ryan is a prick but he will regret being one later on in life. Thank you for all your reviews on these!
Date: September 17, 2007 01:44 pm Title: Positive
Oh! *sniff* Again, you really got me with that last paragraph. Such a tragic, beautiful sentiment. So well written, such beautiful simplicity, it tugged on my heart strings from the second sentence.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. This was a hrd one to write, so I'm glad you liked it.
Date: September 17, 2007 01:39 pm Title: Vacation
Oh my god! Now I'm really crying. Oh, such a dramatic exit for Oscar. And I love the fact that Angela was the most torn up about it. Oscar and Angela have such a wonderful relationship, and you really captured that with just that one line at the end. Perfect.
Author's Response: I do love their friendship that developed in season 3. I hope it continues next season.
Date: September 17, 2007 01:36 pm Title: Missing
Ha, that's hilarious! Definitely the way that Creed would go out.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!
Date: September 17, 2007 01:35 pm Title: Morning
Oh, this was wonderful! I actually have tears in my eyes now. Poor Stanley. Excellent writing, and excellent idea! Very unique fic.
Author's Response: Sorry for the tears! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading!
Date: September 17, 2007 01:00 pm Title: Regret
Kandy R.I.P. So sad it took Ryan over 20 years to figure out his mistake....
Author's Response:
Yep, but at least Kelly found happiness.
Thanks for reading!
Date: September 17, 2007 12:56 pm Title: Regret
this one, and the blurb about phyllis, really got to me. ouchc, poor ryan. i'm worried that this is only going to get more and more sad... yet i can't stop reading!
Author's Response:
At the very least, the further we go, the longer lives each of the characters will have lead.
Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2007 12:55 pm Title: Regret
OMG firthgal will adore you. How very poetic, Larry. I love every single one of these.
Author's Response: Poetic? Wow! Thanks again, DM!
Date: September 17, 2007 12:32 pm Title: Regret
and i just noticed the last name - bernard- as i was hitting submit! :O
Author's Response:
I had to slide that one in there to have at least something happy in this story.
Date: September 17, 2007 12:32 pm Title: DUI
this sotry is reaslly sad, yet poignet (sp?). Keep it coming. :-)
Date: September 17, 2007 12:31 pm Title: Regret
aww, poor kelly and poor ryan. i like this one (odd i know), but it brings out a less... jerky... quality to ryan.
Author's Response: Yeah, I think he's gonna regret letting her go. He wouldn't have put up with her so long if he truly didn't care for her.
Date: September 17, 2007 06:10 am Title: Positive
these always make me sad, why do i keep reading them?
Author's Response: I don't know, but I'm glad you haven't stopped yet! Hopefully I've kept enough happiness in them to balance it out somewhat.
Date: September 16, 2007 01:31 pm Title: Positive
"...he was just Bob"
He didn't need Vance Refrigeration to make him who he was, Phyllis did that for him. So adorable.
Author's Response: Thanks, DM! I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: September 16, 2007 10:56 am Title: Positive
Sigh. These are very sad, and will get sadder I'm sure. I am waiting for Packer's comeuppance, though.
Author's Response:
Unfortunately, I am only including regular cast members in this (with one exception), so I did not plan for Packer. It's certainly enticing to add him, but we're past the point I would have killed him. However, let's just imagine he dies in the most painful, horrible, humiliating way possible.
Date: September 16, 2007 08:23 am Title: Positive
Rest in Peace, Phyllis. I like how Phyllis's influence changed BVVR to just Bob. I guess he figured out what was important in life.
Nice job, larrymcg. This was such a great idea.
Author's Response: Thanks, TLK! I really love the relationship between them and I wanted to honor it here.
Date: September 15, 2007 12:59 pm Title: DUI
Ohh, that's devastating. The worst kind of irony. For her to get her life together just for it to end that way! :(
Author's Response:
This one was inspired by a specific SFU episode. Tough way to go, but at least she got it together before it happened. Thanks for the review!
Date: September 13, 2007 04:36 pm Title: DUI
wow... she finally got sober just to have a life end like that. i am sure there is some sort of karma or anything but it does suck
Author's Response: Yeah, it does, but at least she was happy for a change. Thanks for the review!
Date: September 13, 2007 03:33 pm Title: DUI
Awww. What bitter irony. Poor Meredith.
Author's Response: Yeah, that was a hard one to write, but at least she rebounded before it happened.
Date: September 13, 2007 02:29 pm Title: DUI
Oh no! How ironic for Meredith to go that way. Poor Meredith!
One thing, I think her birth year was earlier...she turned 46 in Season 1 (The Alliance).
Well, at least Meredith went out on a high point. I guess there's something to be said for that!
Nice job with these. Who's next to die???? (Italics = spooky voice)
Author's Response: Thanks for the correction on her birth date! I was just using their real life birth dates and completely forgot hers was mentioned on the show. Thanks for the review.
Date: September 13, 2007 02:26 pm Title: Vacation
Oh, poor Oscar! I love that it was Angela Schrute (yes, I caught that part - nice) who cried hardest. They really do have a bit of a friendship, don't they?
This may tie with Stanley as my favorite.
Date: September 13, 2007 02:15 pm Title: Morning
Oh Meredith, just when she was finally not permanantly hung over. What a crappy way to go.
But, GOOD JOB!
Date: September 13, 2007 12:16 pm Title: DUI
Wow how very Sam Kinison-esque.
Excellent job, again Larry. I like to see how the Schrutes and Halperts are doing these days.
Author's Response: Thanks, DM! Don't little Schrutes sound so scary? Yikes!
Date: September 13, 2007 12:15 pm Title: DUI
LARRY!! Why must you kill everyone off so!?! Did you secretly write Charlie off of "Lost", too?
Author's Response: Nah, I don't think I would've had it in me to kill a hobbit, but I'd kill Sawyer in a heartbeat.