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Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2008 09:30 am Title: Chapter 9

I'm so glad to see this story back. I really think it's one of the strongest things you've ever written, and really showcases your ability to get inside Pam's thoughts. I especially liked how you showed Pam's nervousness and anxiety about going on a date, but coupled that with the excitement of "spreading her wings" and "loving every second of it." I totally believe that about S3 Pam. It must have been scary for her, but thrilling as well. 

Great work!



Author's Response: Thank you, I was glad to see it back too. These last two chapters  probably would've turned out completely different a year ago. Because of where I am I can see it a little clearer and believe that that's truly how she was feeling at the time.

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