8 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2007 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
One of my favorite Snow Patrol songs. A sad song and a sad chapter. Poor Pam. She should have stopped him from walking out the door.
Author's Response: Yes she should have! I hope you liked it! I'm not sure when I'll get to update but hopefully soon.
Date: September 11, 2007 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
DM - You have such a way with words, and are such an amazing writer. I don't think there is anything that you can't do if you put your mind to it! The way you can put all these emotions into words, and really look into your self for these feelings is awesome. I feel while reading these, I can feel what the characters are feeling...and what you are feeling. :o)
Author's Response: Thanks D ;). You know where I draw the feelings from so now you can see it through my words. Crazy stuff going on in my head huh?
Date: September 09, 2007 12:57 am Title: Chapter 2
Guh, so I realized I'm a terrible terrible person and never got back to you on this chapter :( I am so so sorry. Blame life and it's wacky ability to completely spin out of control. Again, I apologize profusely and hope that I can still beta for you!
P.S. This was great. So many heart breaking images; Pam needing to take pills to sleep at night? So sad. Love what you've done here and can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Don't worry about it! CM was online yesterday and I just asked him to sneak in. I was struggling with tense issues and had talked to him about it so it's all good. :) I will be working on chapter 3 soon so you'll definitely get a crack at that one.
Thanks for the glorious review!
10 [Report This]Date: September 08, 2007 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
DM, this story is so achingly wonderful. Really, there's so many amazing images and emotions here. I love the way Pam's tears and the water from her shower are mixing together. Such a great way to describe the mixed up emotions she's feeling at that moment. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you mister beta man! It's really hard to write and still end up being in a good mood but that's your job, to cheer me up, and you do an excellent job of it.