Reviews For The Consequence of Devotion
Reviewer: Alamos Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2008 09:46 am Title: Chapter 4
Date: July 18, 2008 09:46 am Title: Chapter 4
The directness and abruptness of Jim was Pam seems like such a natural reaction ("No, not now." His voice showed his obvious exhaustion.) Another example of how these two lack in the communication area.
Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23, 2008 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 4
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Date: January 23, 2008 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 4
Very nicely done! I like the changes you made, especially with the ending. I think it works a lot better now. :)
Yeah, can we not wait another four months? ;P
Author's Response: I do take bribes.