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Reviewer: Alamos Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2008 09:58 am Title: Chapter 6

Pam's anger and frustration w/ Jim is a nice refreshing approach. I like how you haven't made her to be a "victim." The scream in the truck is such an honest raw reaction to her situation.

Reviewer: just-once Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2008 06:12 am Title: Chapter 6

Ohhh mannnn.... please update again soon. *pleading* This is SO good. I hate scrolling down, knowing I'm coming closer and closer to the end of a chapter like this one. So much emotion - it was gut-wrenching. It made me mad at both of them at the end to see how they handled their confrontation, but it was so realistic of their characters. You've done a great job.

Author's Response: Wow thank you! I'm glad to see that I'm keeping it realistic and I'm happy to know people are enjoying it. Thanks so much for your review it's nice to hear back from the readers.

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