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Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2007 06:09 am Title: Prologue

Dang it, I was really getting excited about a kiss.  Good luck with finals and hurry back ASAP!

Reviewer: skeber Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2007 06:50 pm Title: Prologue

So good!! Hope the next chapter isn't too far off!!! It's so good!!! Loved the part about them getting the camera!!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07, 2007 06:54 pm Title: Prologue

So nice to have an update, Wendy.  I love this series.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2007 05:31 am Title: Prologue

Wistful--that's the word that comes to mind.  The inner dialog is makes me sigh.  Such a good job.

Reviewer: Sweetpea Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2007 04:49 am Title: Prologue

Can't tell you how thrilled I was to get a first look at this.  Like if Dave Matthews called and asked me to give a listen to a new song.  Okay, maybe I'd be a little more thrilled with Dave calling me...but, come on!  I squealed when I saw you had them going to Stamford!  Loved Jim freaking out because Pam's in the shower and I really loved that he lost his temper with her, but apologized immediately and she let it go right away, too.  Can't wait for the road trip!

Reviewer: Token Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2007 09:33 pm Title: Prologue

Ooooh great concept... on to the next chapter to see where this goes!

Reviewer: GodInThisChilis Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2007 09:04 am Title: Prologue

I am loving this so very much. I love how you take the reader on the journey with Jim and Pam. You can feel the time passing and the inevitable parting approaching. This is so lovely and real.

The dream sequence was awesome as well. No need to be nervous there.

Looking forward to more hours!

Reviewer: katie_606 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2007 06:04 am Title: Prologue

Hi!

PLEASE DON'T STOP! i meant to review earlier but i'd forgotten my password, i completely love your story! Please keep going! 

 

Reviewer: missmargaret Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2007 06:29 am Title: Prologue

I'm so excited to see where this is going! I love this different take on Casino Night!

And a tiny editing question:
"I know it’s selfish, but I’m glad she said before I had to because honestly I don’t think I could have done it without crying like a girl."

I think you meant  "I'm glad she said it before..."

Again, great start!!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2007 05:22 am Title: Prologue

How I wish Casino Night ended this way.  I'm all for Fancy New Beesly - but I could have done without the S3 angst.  So excited to see what you have in store! 

Author's Response: Thanks so much!  I agree, S3 was just a tad too depressing for my tastes.  But glad you're enjoying this!  

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 06:38 am Title: Prologue

I really like the concept on this story.  I am looiking forward to a memorable 24 hours of JAM!!

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2007 03:40 pm Title: Prologue

OMG, AAAH! Imagine if it really happened this way? wow. I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I know, how hardcore would that have been?  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: big haircut Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2007 03:32 pm Title: Prologue

wow! I am so excited for this to continue. This is such a great idea. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!  :)

Reviewer: Pixel Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2007 07:16 am Title: Prologue

Of late, I've kind of lost interest in fic, but I have to tell you that I'm definitely sucked in by your beginning, and will be checking back for updates.  Nice job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!  Glad this story could spark your interest again :)

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2007 10:19 pm Title: Prologue

Ooooo. I really like this idea. Sounds like it's gonna be a fun ride. Looking forward to 24 more chapters!

Author's Response: Thanks so much :)  It'll be fun, but definitely bumpy!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Orfice Flan Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2007 08:32 pm Title: Prologue

I can't wait for more.  GREAT JOB!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  More to come soon!

Reviewer: the_squirrel Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2007 06:47 pm Title: Prologue

this looks like its gonna be awesome!

Author's Response: I hope it will be :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: bnbrice Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2007 03:29 pm Title: Prologue

So good! Please hurry with the next chapter! 

Author's Response: I'm typing as fast as I can :)  Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2007 02:32 pm Title: Prologue

What a fantastic idea! While I loved Casino Night as it stands, this is a great way to get even more from Jim leaving. I can't wait to see what you've got cooked up!

Author's Response: More to come soon, I promise!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2007 01:48 pm Title: Prologue

Awesome.  Hit us with the first hour.

Author's Response: Will do :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Pamela Beesley Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2007 12:10 pm Title: Prologue

I love this concept!  Question: Does this mean the infamous parking lot scene didn't happen?  Just wanted to make sure I have it in the right context.  Can't wait for the update!!

Author's Response: Correct.  Instead of Jim following "I was just umm..." with "I'm in love with you", he derails into what I have written.  Hope that clears things up :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: GreenDress Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2007 12:10 pm Title: Prologue

I can not wait to see where you go with this!  Please let it end happy?

Author's Response: Guess you'll just have to read until the end to find out ;)  Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2007 11:33 am Title: Prologue

Wow -- ok, you've got my attention!  I like how you're writing Jim's narration.  It really sounds like him.

I hope you'll be updating this soon!



Author's Response: That's what I was hoping for!  And yes, more updates are on the way.  Thanks so much lisahoo!

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2007 11:19 am Title: Prologue

“Yeah.  I think it is.”

She doesn’t say anything else, just closes the space between us, with her arms around my waist and her head lying gently on my chest.

So sad, but so good.  Gah. NOw works for me too.  For a new chapter.  I love this premise! And your 1st ch is packed with awesome (it's sad but funny but somewhat hopeful yet bittersweet)  Can't wait to see where they all go! 



Author's Response: More chapters are on the way!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2007 10:58 am Title: Prologue

Awesome.

Author's Response: Thank you :)  And thanks for reading!

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