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Reviewer: iheartcreed Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2008 04:29 pm Title: 11:00 AM

This is bad, very bad. I want to enjoy this, because you've done such a good job. Jim's thoughts seem so Jim and Pam's reactions are so Pam. And heaven knows its a better solution to Casino Night than "I can't," but I'm TERRIFIED it isn't going to end well, and this chapter did NOT help that fear. I'll continue to anxiously read. Please give it a happy ending!!!

Reviewer: JamesMichael Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2007 08:22 pm Title: 11:00 AM

this is a brilliant story, and its just hit where we've all wanted it to - and you've left it on a cliff! sign of a good writer if you ask moi!

Reviewer: A Little Stitious Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30, 2007 08:25 am Title: 11:00 AM

Oh, wow.  I hadn't read the last chapter somehow so I just caught up on both these two...talk about going from a radiant high to a desperate low.  You write the agony so well...but please update soon with some happiness!

Author's Response: I will do my best.  Thanks so much for reading! :)

Reviewer: CashBasket Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 30, 2007 02:23 am Title: 11:00 AM

WHAT?!?!?! Where is she going??? Dang that Pam and her perpetual indecisiveness.

Oh the suspense! Wendy Blue, you kill me :)

But I'll wait patiently for the next installment...hopefully with more blue skies to come :)

Author's Response: Haha, CashBasket, that made me laugh :)  Thanks for hangin' in there and I do believe there might be some blue skies on the horizon.  Stay tuned!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29, 2007 07:44 pm Title: 11:00 AM

Uh oh.  Looks like Jim overdid his Roy impersonation.  The two of them are just so confused and overtired, no wonder they're acting crazy.  Can't wait to see where Pam's heading to now.  We've still got a lot of daylight left!

Author's Response: A lot of daylight left, indeed!  Don't you worry, plenty of time for Jim to grovel :)  Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: December 29, 2007 06:46 pm Title: 11:00 AM

Well done, well done. I got the internet to work so I could read it, and it was oh so worth it!! Great job with the tension, and I love Jim's Roy!Act. --CH

Author's Response: Thanks, CH, couldn't have done it without you!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29, 2007 06:32 pm Title: 11:00 AM

I so didn't expect that, but I trust you.  I know more excitement is ahead, and I can't wait! 

Author's Response: Aww, the trust is appreciated :)  More to come soon, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: dundermifflinthisisdani Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29, 2007 05:22 pm Title: 11:00 AM

you made us wait THIS long and this is what we get ?! where is the love ?!?! :P

Author's Response: Haha, love is on the way, I promise!  Hang in there and thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: December 29, 2007 04:36 pm Title: 11:00 AM

Oh crap! Surely that cab isn't going to take her all the way back to Scranton?  Isn't there some sort of interstate commerce law where you can't go from CT to PA in a taxi? No?  Well, there should be.  Please update soon.  Seriously. Soon.

Author's Response: Uhh, sure there's a law?  I really don't know :)  Either way, another update is soon on the way, I can promise you tha.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29, 2007 04:15 pm Title: 11:00 AM

It does my heart a world of good to see this story back up at the top of the "most recent" page. :) Let's try and make this a habit, shall we?

Oh, Swiff, you already know my thoughts on this, but WOW this is a great chapter. I love how you refuse to pull any sort of punches, and you let Jim go just a little bit too far. It's very real, as is Pam's reaction.

Now then, i second what Lisahoo has suggested: that you update soon so that we find out where that cab is headed! :) 



Author's Response: Yes sir!  And hey, you know this wouldn't even exist without your tremendous help, so thank you!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29, 2007 04:04 pm Title: 11:00 AM

OMG! I thought the last chapter was a cliff-hanger, but this?!? You'd better be well rested, missy.  The people need to know where that cab is headed and how quickly Jim can follow it!

Author's Response: Very well-rested, lisahoo, never fear!  I'm doing the next chapter in a slightly different format so the update will come much quicker.  Thanks so much for stickin' with this!

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