Date: September 18, 2007 05:40 am Title: 10:00 PM
i love this so much. they're really precious and i can see the two of them going this route if he hadn't said those 5 wonderful words. but i can also see how this is just gonna make things even more stressful for their relationship. i hope you take this in a good direction :) i can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: It will definitely be an interesting day, I can tell you that :) Thanks so much for reading!
9 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2007 05:17 am Title: 10:00 PM
"Coincidence? Nothing's coincidence." (Damn right I quoted AWTR) This story is pretty much awesome. I've been waiting for a story that had Jim just admit he was leaving rather than the whole love thing. Really enjoying this!
Author's Response: Umm, I love that movie :) So glad you're enjoying it, thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2007 04:31 am Title: 10:00 PM
I love this. I love this line:
We're just two friends saying goodbye the only way we know how.
This has so much potential - I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks so much :) I've basically got Chapter 3 done so hopefully that will be up within the next day or so. Thanks for reading!
9 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2007 12:05 am Title: 10:00 PM
This is totally awesome! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! More to come soon!
10 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2007 11:44 pm Title: 10:00 PM
review 24? maybe? LOVE this story. love it. can't wait to read their next hour, seems very exciting.
Author's Response: Yes! You are lucky review #24! Want to know what your prize is? A new chapter sometime in the very near future :D Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2007 03:40 pm Title: Prologue
OMG, AAAH! Imagine if it really happened this way? wow. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I know, how hardcore would that have been? Thanks for reading!
Date: September 17, 2007 03:32 pm Title: Prologue
wow! I am so excited for this to continue. This is such a great idea. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! :)
Date: September 17, 2007 07:16 am Title: Prologue
Of late, I've kind of lost interest in fic, but I have to tell you that I'm definitely sucked in by your beginning, and will be checking back for updates. Nice job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad this story could spark your interest again :)
Date: September 16, 2007 10:19 pm Title: Prologue
Ooooo. I really like this idea. Sounds like it's gonna be a fun ride. Looking forward to 24 more chapters!
Author's Response: Thanks so much :) It'll be fun, but definitely bumpy! Thanks for reading!
Date: September 16, 2007 08:32 pm Title: Prologue
I can't wait for more. GREAT JOB!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! More to come soon!
Date: September 16, 2007 06:47 pm Title: Prologue
this looks like its gonna be awesome!
Author's Response: I hope it will be :) Thanks for reading!
Date: September 16, 2007 03:29 pm Title: Prologue
So good! Please hurry with the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm typing as fast as I can :) Thanks so much for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2007 02:32 pm Title: Prologue
What a fantastic idea! While I loved Casino Night as it stands, this is a great way to get even more from Jim leaving. I can't wait to see what you've got cooked up!
Author's Response: More to come soon, I promise! Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2007 01:48 pm Title: Prologue
Awesome. Hit us with the first hour.
Author's Response: Will do :) Thanks for reading!
Date: September 16, 2007 12:10 pm Title: Prologue
I love this concept! Question: Does this mean the infamous parking lot scene didn't happen? Just wanted to make sure I have it in the right context. Can't wait for the update!!
Author's Response: Correct. Instead of Jim following "I was just umm..." with "I'm in love with you", he derails into what I have written. Hope that clears things up :) Thanks for reading!
Date: September 16, 2007 12:10 pm Title: Prologue
I can not wait to see where you go with this! Please let it end happy?
Author's Response: Guess you'll just have to read until the end to find out ;) Thanks so much for reading!
Date: September 16, 2007 11:33 am Title: Prologue
Wow -- ok, you've got my attention! I like how you're writing Jim's narration. It really sounds like him.
I hope you'll be updating this soon!
Author's Response: That's what I was hoping for! And yes, more updates are on the way. Thanks so much lisahoo!
Date: September 16, 2007 11:19 am Title: Prologue
“Yeah. I think it is.”
She doesn’t say anything else, just closes the space between us, with her arms around my waist and her head lying gently on my chest.
So sad, but so good. Gah. NOw works for me too. For a new chapter. I love this premise! And your 1st ch is packed with awesome (it's sad but funny but somewhat hopeful yet bittersweet) Can't wait to see where they all go!
Author's Response: More chapters are on the way! Thanks for reading!
Date: September 16, 2007 10:58 am Title: Prologue
Awesome.
Author's Response: Thank you :) And thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2007 10:55 am Title: Prologue
love this premise. And I love the hug! so sweet. Keep it coming
Author's Response: More to come soon! Thanks for reading!
Date: September 16, 2007 10:52 am Title: Prologue
Interesting--I can't wait to see where this goes! I like the first-person, too. Looking forward to more chapters!! -CH
Author's Response: Thanks GMMBG! There are plenty of good things to come so stay tuned :)
Date: September 16, 2007 10:44 am Title: Prologue
Wendy, I love this idea so much. Jim's inner thoughts are great and the secret code is so true. Can't wait to see how you have them spending each hour.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so, Sweetpea, because I'm actually pretty terrified of writing from Jim's POV. Glad to know it's working! Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2007 10:40 am Title: Prologue
I am definitely very excited tof this entire concept and I just really really want to read some more. God. Gorgeous, as always.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) It really means a lot to me that you like it! More to come soon!
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2007 10:28 am Title: Prologue
I can't wait to see where this goes. It feels true.
Author's Response: Thanks Shassafrass! The thing I care about the most is staying true to these wonderful characters. Thanks for reading!
Date: September 16, 2007 10:11 am Title: Prologue
Oooh, nice idea, Wendy! Just 24 hours, huh? Can't wait to see what happens next and where they go for their day together.
Author's Response: The possibilities are endless! :) Thanks so much for reading!