Date: December 04, 2008 09:24 pm Title: Anatomy of an Office
Ah, I like it. I like it a lot. Michael could be the ass. Jim would be the brains. I agree with that. Or the funny bone. Either way. Hee. Great work.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: February 21, 2008 02:56 pm Title: Anatomy of an Office
i really enjoy reading these because it's nice to just read something really quickly and not have to invest in the whole story. it's just a quick laugh and then you go on to the next one. i love it.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: October 24, 2007 03:29 pm Title: Anatomy of an Office
LOL!!
100% Picture Perfect. I can completely see the entire scene and I can completely see myself open-mouthed at Michael's completely inappropriate comment and completely believe he would say it.
Have I mentioned you're good?
Where is your script?
Where is your script?
Where is your script?
:D
Author's Response: Lol... It's up! It really is! It's called Employee Withholding! Gah! Stop yelling at me!!! lol... Thanks so much!
Date: October 24, 2007 01:31 pm Title: Anatomy of an Office
Genius, like always!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks!
Date: October 24, 2007 10:18 am Title: Anatomy of an Office
Sorry for the double post here, but I didn't know where else to contact you. :) The story in question was called "The Lottery."
You can delete this post if you like. No hard feelings. :)
Author's Response: lol... no, I'll keep it. Keep on double posting... lol... And I will check that story out... thanks!
8 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2007 09:38 am Title: Anatomy of an Office
Very funny cold opening! I enjoy these script formats, and wish more people would write them.
Your talking heads with Michael and Jim reminded me of a talking head I wrote for Michael once in a story I did. And, if you'll pardon the personal indulgence, I'll share it here:
Michael: Who is the heart of this office, you ask? Well, as boss, it’s definitely me. But just because I’m the heart that doesn’t mean that there aren’t lots of other important organs here as well. So I’m the heart, and Kevin’s the stomach and Dwight’s the…I don’t know…the spleen? And that would make Jim and Pam sort of like the uh… lungs? The kidneys, maybe?
He thinks hard about this.
Michael: Or, no…how about this. Maybe I’m the brain and Jim and Pam are the heart….Except, no… you don’t have two hearts. Wait, am I the brain?
So, I guess great minds think alike, huh? :)
Great job!
Author's Response: lol.. that's very funny! I think I like it better than mine... what story is that? I'd like to read it. And maybe your great mind and my defective, cloudy mind think alike.... which is not a good sign for you. : ) Thanks!