10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2008 10:10 pm Title: My Big Fat Geek Wedding
This was seriously amazing. So in character and funny. Very, very well done. Loved it!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks!
Date: October 14, 2008 08:53 pm Title: My Big Fat Geek Wedding
Yay! More kgreene cold opens. Pitch-perfect as always and THANK YOU for being sparing the angst. Man there's a mess of it around here lately. Yes, vests on grooms = good in most cases. Rock on Kevin, cheers!
-Mint
Author's Response: lol... I will try, MCC! And I understand the angst here, to a degree. Unrequited love or secret longing is a big thing with us humans. It tugs at everyone's heartstrings. I'm just trying to add a little humor to the mix. And I'm glad you and others like it!
8 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2008 04:12 pm Title: My Big Fat Geek Wedding
Awesome! You write the dialogue so well.
Sometimes I'm a little intimidated by the sheer number of chapters you have here--I'm just like, ugh, I can't possibly catch up with all of these--but then I read just one and it's just the perfect-sized little bit of entertainment. Nice job!
Author's Response: Well, thank you! I appreciate that! Don't be put off by the amount of chapters, they are really quick reads much like this one. I hope you will check them out and enjoy them as much as you liked this one. Thanks again!
Date: October 14, 2008 11:18 am Title: My Big Fat Geek Wedding
I do love it when Jim and Dwight manage to connect on some level.
Author's Response: Me too! I've tried to write tiny moments in other C/O's where they are actually having the same thought, which is a rarity. Usually it involves Michael, but not this time. Thanks, Belsum!
Date: October 14, 2008 01:15 am Title: My Big Fat Geek Wedding
yeah, a new C/O! I love these. Keep them comin.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try!
Date: October 13, 2008 08:47 pm Title: Dummies
I was really excited to see another of your Cold Opens pop up, and I was not disappointed.
*claps loudly*
Author's Response: lol... thanks so much!
Date: October 13, 2008 03:26 pm Title: My Big Fat Geek Wedding
YES! YES! LOL! "Just die already" LOL!
Classic. Welcome back :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad to be back and glad you're here too.
8 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2008 12:30 pm Title: My Big Fat Geek Wedding
Wow, you managed to be sentimental and funny at the same time. I think they should film this one for the show!
Great job!
Author's Response: Boy, I would LOVE that. Thanks! And, yeah, I wanted to have a little sweetness in there for Jam. Glad you liked!
Date: October 13, 2008 11:35 am Title: My Big Fat Geek Wedding
Hey there, kgreene! What a happy treat on this lethargic Monday. I think this CO is one of my favorites. Love this exchange:
JIM
I dare say not. I will not look like Richard
Dawson at my own wedding.
PAM
(laughing)
Survey says no, Jim. You will look
smashingly dapper.
Heeee :) I have nothing against vests, although I prefer them NOT dipped in anything...
Author's Response: lol.. thanks, Nan. Glad you liked! And I too, am not a fan of a vest, or anything for that matter, that's been dipped in urine.
Date: September 05, 2008 03:36 pm Title: Pigs in (Office) Space
LOL This one was good, I liked the use of the camera in Pam's bedroom.
I'm so sad to hear that you're going to STOP cold openings! You left off at #49.. I think you ought to finish up to 50 *wink*. It's a good even number to stop at eh?
ENCORE ENCORE ENCORE ENCORE! :)
Author's Response: lol.. didn't think about that... but I'm not stopping, just.. taking a little break. Unless something hits me between now and the show's premiere. We'll see... Thanks, Dasani!
10 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2008 01:09 pm Title: Pigs in (Office) Space
You never fail to make me laugh with these, kgreene. I don't think I've ever reviewed this before and I'm sorry for that. I always enjoy each and every one.
Author's Response: Thank you! Don't be sorry, I'm just glad you enjoyed it!
Date: September 05, 2008 12:08 pm Title: Dummies
Gawd, I love these, they make me laugh.
"...over a certain... blonde... ice cube"
Niiiice.
Author's Response: lol.. thanks!
Date: September 05, 2008 11:03 am Title: Pigs in (Office) Space
You know, the fact that we didn't actually see the pig thing is what made this work. It would have been too much if it had been on camera. Nice!
Author's Response: Oh, definitely. Logistically it would've been a nightmare to do that. It's much funnier to just hear it. Thanks so much!
Date: September 05, 2008 10:58 am Title: Eyes Wide Shut
The quarters "subplot" is what made this one. It was such a perfect Dwight derailment.
Author's Response: lol.. thanks! Actually, that's my favorite part, too.
10 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2008 10:47 am Title: Pigs in (Office) Space
Kevin, thank YOU for consistently making me smile. This CO was no exception. You now have me psyched for seeing Pam in New York and the possibilities it brings. I hope we're lucky enough to see the photo booth pic you describe ; ) Hoping to hear from you again soon!
Author's Response: Thank you, Nan, you have so supportive. I really appreciate it.. and I would love to see the photo-booths pics too!
Date: September 05, 2008 10:10 am Title: Pigs in (Office) Space
Oh, that was so cute. The cameras panning from the kissing-picture to the bed and back again....priceless. Thanks for these, they're always so enjoyable! And that's a great Halloween idea. We'll have to brainstorm something for you to work that into. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! I saw your response to my review and I was like "Dammit, i gotta finish this one up and post it. FOR CALLISTO!!" lol.. Thanks for writing... and somehow, we'll make that Halloween idea work. Hey, take it, do what you may with it... anyone who wants it can have it...lol...
Date: September 05, 2008 09:59 am Title: Pigs in (Office) Space
HA! Very silly. Great work on all of these. Thanks for helping us pass the summer quickly!
Author's Response: Aw.. thank you, I really appreciate that!
Date: August 25, 2008 10:42 pm Title: Eyes Wide Shut
So happy! Honest to God, I thought to myself, "I sure am in the mood for another kgreene cold opener..." and there one was! Loved it, loved it. Though I am not sure about the Rain Man reference - Michael seems immature and a bit socially clueless at times...well...maybe that does fall under the autism spectrum...Again, I say: you write dialogue to perfection, to absolute perfection. Dare I say better than the actual writers?? I can really see the faces to match the scene - to a point where I am getting slightly confused sometimes. (real episode, or kgreene fanfic?)
Author's Response: Wow, that's high praise! Thank you! And it's funny you should mention that about the Rain Man comparison. I felt that it was kinda a stretch for Carol to think that initially but the more I thought about Michael the more I could see someone saying " Wow... this kinda makes me think of him in a way." It's not spot on for sure and there is exaggeration in the comparison but I thought it was funny enough to get away with. Thanks for bringing that up, that is a worthy point to discuss.
Date: August 25, 2008 05:57 pm Title: Eyes Wide Shut
I love your cold opens. So cute.
--I'll give you ten bucks in quarters
if you go talk to him for me.
--Make it twenty and you have a deal.
Now that is awesome. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: August 25, 2008 05:49 pm Title: Eyes Wide Shut
*dies laughing*
Too bad Michael doesn't watch Judge Judy.
Author's Response: lol..That Michael is something, isn't he?
Date: August 25, 2008 02:36 pm Title: Eyes Wide Shut
I felt like I was in the room, K : ) Ouch. Definitely not my underwear...
Author's Response: LOL... Uh oh... How many Rain Man references have I just bought myself? lol.. Thanks Nan!
Date: August 19, 2008 01:00 pm Title: Dummies
I guess it was mean to Donna, in that she was pretty much slavering openly over poor Jim, who was clearly not enjoying it...but hey! IF that would be her MO, then of course - not mean at all! Thanks for the laugh again.
Author's Response: lol.. gotcha! Well, Donna has a SERIOUS thing for our main man so she didn't mind at all...lol.. And I think Jim was probably very flattered.. but there's only one girl for Jim. Sorry ladies! And thanks again, Mint!
Date: August 19, 2008 09:28 am Title: Double-teamed
Ohhhh, that was a little mean to Donna! But it was funny too. If Donna enjoyed it and cracked up then she is definitely my kind of people, and deserves to be immortalized in a kgreene Cold Opener fanfic. Many thanks as always Kevin - also enjoyed vastly the "Land" cold opener. I love Dwight as do we all.
Author's Response: That was mean to Donna? Wow,I hope not... she liked it actually. I let her read it first(I never would've posted it if she didn't like it). She is cool. We have a good time posting over on LITO.... and thanks! I'm glad you liked this one and the Dwight one. I know you love Dwight, I was curious to see what you thought... Thanks!
Date: August 19, 2008 08:43 am Title: Dummies
These are really good, very well written and I'd like to see the shows that came after.
Author's Response: Thank you! Boy, I'd like to see these shows too...
Date: August 18, 2008 12:50 pm Title: This Land's Not Your Land, This Land Is MY Land
Ewwwww! (And I mean that as a compliment!)
Author's Response: Thanks! That seems to be the overwhelming opinion on the end of this one... lol.. didn't mean to gross you out, ladies!