9 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2007 07:05 am Title: The Other
Anotehr gem of a cold open. It would be great to see eomething like this air on the Office.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: September 26, 2007 05:02 pm Title: Four Stars
HA! This one is so awesome. You really do have a gift for these.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: September 26, 2007 01:26 pm Title: Sleep Over
I love that he has hsi own key to get into the vending amchines. ; ) Good opener.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: September 25, 2007 07:21 pm Title: Wacked
"And the Corleone’s… uh, Beesly’s… have never been back."
So funny! You are so creative!!
Author's Response: Thanks again!
Date: September 25, 2007 07:17 pm Title: Ask Dwight
You are brilliant! This was soo funny! I loved Pam's question - and Dwight's response to Jim's question was so spot on!
Author's Response: Wow, brilliant... it's obvious that you people have never met me...lol.. thanks!
Date: September 25, 2007 07:15 pm Title: Dummies
This was so funny - and so them! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: September 25, 2007 02:50 pm Title: A Rose By Any Other Name
Those names are quite a mouthful and very, very Kelly. Great job!
Author's Response: Yeah, I almost hurt myself just typing those... thanks!
Date: September 25, 2007 02:48 pm Title: Four Stars
Wow, levels. We're getting fancy, here. ; ) This is seriously one of the funniest stories I've read on here. I love your sense of humor.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you. I really appreciate that.
Date: September 25, 2007 02:45 pm Title: Peanuts - Super-Hero Parent Killers
I loved how Dwight got so upset when Michael had no clue about any of those superheroes. This is really witty and funny! Keep them coming!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2007 08:11 am Title: A Rose By Any Other Name
I love...well, all of them. but my favorites so far are the superhero one and the one with Pam & Toby's little interaction. I love Toby; I would be rooting for him and Pam to get together if Pam and Jim weren't so *obviously* meant to be.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, poor Toby. Originally, that one was going to be more about Pam and Toby, with Toby ending up moping about Jim and Pam at the end. But I didn't want to do that. I wanted to have Toby win for a change. I think we all love it when Toby has a good moment. But at the same time I am fascinated by Toby's unrequited love for Pam. One day I'll write one that will have that but be funny at the same time. Thanks again!
Date: September 25, 2007 08:08 am Title: Four Stars
that was great. classic.
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2007 07:34 am Title: Four Stars
Four Stars gets Ten stars from me. How I would absolutely love to see a cold open like this on The Office. You should send this to someone - not sure who but it seems perfect for the show. I could see the faces of each character as I was reading.
Author's Response: I wasn't 100% sure about this chapter... but you've made me feel better about it. Thanks!
Date: September 25, 2007 07:29 am Title: Four Stars
AWESOME indeed : )
Author's Response: Glad you liked!
Date: September 25, 2007 07:26 am Title: Four Stars
oh my gosh! Kevin is so... slow. this was hilarious and perfectly fluffy :) thanks for giving the people what they want!
Author's Response: lol.. Thanks! I wanted to show that, hey, I can write fluff, too! (Just don't tell anyone...)
Date: September 24, 2007 10:02 am Title: Peanuts - Super-Hero Parent Killers
Yup. Got me again. Good thing I work alone. You are one funny m0!@3&#~*(+&.
Author's Response: lol... Thanks, Shass! I aims to please!
Date: September 24, 2007 08:07 am Title: Peanuts - Super-Hero Parent Killers
wow. that was amazing. thank you for being a genius!
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks. That is, wothout a doubt, the first and, no doubt, last time I will have anyone say that to me...lol...
Date: September 22, 2007 12:43 pm Title: Dummies
You are so good at this!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I wish some particular folks out west thought the same...
Date: September 21, 2007 06:54 pm Title: 300
COMPLETELY great for a cold open. I love when Pam and Jim make each other laugh.
Author's Response: So do I! I definitely want them to laugh more together. I plan on writing some more Cold Openings with them doing dual talking heads. They're just so cute together... Thanks!
Date: September 21, 2007 06:50 pm Title: Ask Dwight
All I can say is that I'm actually cracking up out loud right now. What would that be? CUOL? Is that a thing? :)
Author's Response: CUOL! I like that! I'm gonna steal that from you... lol. Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked!
Date: September 21, 2007 06:47 pm Title: Dummies
You really have the characters down to a T! I mean, the dialogue is perfect. This really would be a good one for them to do. The tag of Michael's narcissism at the end was just right. "Wow... is that me in there?" I can hear the fascination and delight in his voice. :)
Author's Response: Thanks.. It took me a little while to figure out what I wanted Michael to say... glad you liked!
Date: September 21, 2007 01:47 pm Title: Up To Speed
So I worry about the writers...I mean the show's writers. I mean, there's only so much brilliance they can come up with before things start to get repetitive...I wonder if they'll start to 'borrow' if they get desperate? It really is amazing how many good ideas you have. I could practically hear Kevin in my ear for this one.
Author's Response: Wow! That is high praise! Thanks so much, you always make me feel good, Shass!
Date: September 21, 2007 01:21 pm Title: Up To Speed
He should be scared after what Kevin told her. : ) Good job!
Rose : )
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: September 20, 2007 02:43 pm Title: Early
Tobeast. I laughed so hard. You really have a knack for these.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope I can keep it going!
Date: September 20, 2007 10:34 am Title: Early
Okay, so I have the world's most obnoxious laugh...seriously. It starts off as kind of a normal-sounding giggle and then morphs into a sort of Burt-Reynolds-in-the-Smokey-movies thing and then moves straight up through hyena territory, landing squarely in the land of the guffaw, which is vaguely reminiscent of a braying donkey, only possibly louder, and no matter where I am, people turn around wearing the WTF? expression. So yes, Dude, you make me guffaw. Thanks a whole hell of a lot.
Author's Response: LOL.. wow, that sounds BEYOND sexy! lol... That Burt Reynolds high-pitched cackle! Classic. And then you take it up an another octave or two? Talent. Pure talent. lol... "The Land Of the Guffaw." Isn't that the sequel to 'The Land of the Lost"? Wow. I am prouder than proud that I caused such an amalgam of laughter. Thank you. I, too, have a bone to pick with you(that needs re-phrasing). If you saw my last review for Not a Word... Chapter 11, then you know what I mean... rn
Date: September 20, 2007 09:35 am Title: Early
That's awesome! I love Pam and Toby! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks... Toby's gotta get some love, y'know?