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Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2023 06:23 am Title: Sweet Pancake Syrup

A great post-The Job adventure!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2007 10:11 pm Title: Sweet Pancake Syrup

That was very sweet.  Embarrassed Pam is pretty realistic.  Congratulations on succeeding in making very unromantic fast food place cute!

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2007 11:59 am Title: Sweet Pancake Syrup

Aww, cute!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2007 11:55 am Title: Sweet Pancake Syrup

So awesome! Great way to distract me from the fact that there's six hours till the premiere!

Author's Response: Glad it helped. Yeah premiere!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24, 2007 05:54 pm Title: Dutch Apple Pie

Aww!  How do you make BK so freaking romantic?  Nicely done.  I can just imagine Jim staring at Pam like they are the only two people on the planet.  Sweetness.

Author's Response: I'm just that talented.;) Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24, 2007 04:38 pm Title: Dutch Apple Pie

So cute! Can't wait to see what happens next ;)

Author's Response: Ha! Well, then I'm glad you liked the end.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2007 06:08 am Title: Shake It Up

I agree with you (or, with this fic, at least) that they aren't going to go swooning into "happily ever after" right away. How could they? The road has been too bumpy.  Still, the tone here is beautiful and hopeful.

Author's Response: I tried to make the tone angsty but still hopeful so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: sweetchariots Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2007 04:23 am Title: Shake It Up

So sweet! Why can't these two crazy kids just get it together? ha ha

Author's Response: Spoiler alert: they did. Yeah!

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 08:19 pm Title: Shake It Up

It's a good thing you posted this second chapter because you probably would've lost me without it. I mean, I liked your first chapter okay, but I wasn't really excited to read until Jim showed up with the flowers (yay!) The only thing I don't get is that it seems like Jim would have had the initiative to fix their relationship sooner, but I'm glad he's doing it now!

Sorry, I hope that didn't sound harsh. I really am excited to see what you do with this, and I can't wait to read more! :)



Author's Response: All good points so I hope you liked the way it ended. Thanks!

Reviewer: McGigi Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 08:11 pm Title: The Broiler

Thanks for writing this; I've always thought that they might have an awkward time of it once they started dating, and I really like what you're doing with it. I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 06:22 pm Title: Shake It Up

Aw, I'm loving this! The course of true love never does run smooth, does it? Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: It never does run smooth, does it?

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 06:04 pm Title: Shake It Up

As much as I enjoy reading all the first date fics where everything is rainbows and butterflies, I am so excited to see where you go with this, because it's (in my opinion) definitely the more realistic route. If NBC sold DM pajama pants, I'd definitely buy them! The image of Jim surprising Pam with flowers out of nowhere is really sweet.

Author's Response: DM pajama pants would be sooo sweet! Glad you liked this.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 05:58 pm Title: Shake It Up

Ooooh - this is hopping with potential - I am very excited to see what comes next.  :-)

More, please.  And I'd like it SuperSized.   



Author's Response: Mm...SuperSized Jam. Wait... what? Thanks!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 05:57 pm Title: Shake It Up

Aww! I was worried this was going to be a 'why Pam & Jim' don't work' out story... but it's a 'how Pam & Jim are dorks' story.  Which I can buy.  As a start. 

P.S.  I want some DM pajama pants! 



Author's Response: They're total dorks, which is why I love them. :)

Reviewer: Stablergirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 05:56 pm Title: Shake It Up

yeah!!! i love this it is so realistic and fitting.  can't wait for more ;-)

Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you liked the rest!

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