Date: October 30, 2007 03:13 pm Title: Don't Go Breakin' My Heart
glad you took some of my suggestions and used them. Now this chapter really has some bite to it... and also a more normal response to being kissed like that.
Author's Response: i'm glad that i took your advice. you have many great ideas and i'm glad to take them (: i'm not sure if you are willing, but if you are, i desperatly need a beta, and you would be a great one if you are up for it. if you are, just email me at rawrrxxmattie@aim.com
Date: October 30, 2007 11:58 am Title: Don't Go Breakin' My Heart
When i saw that you had written a new chapter i was uber happy. What you did with having Karen and Roy show up together was brilliant... but i was not expecting that whole Roy grabbing Pam and kissing her thing, or the Karen and Jim one.
What i would have really liked to see was Pam slap Roy and then have Jim say something a little cold to Karen something along the lines of her being a bitch. I know we all think Jim and Pam are too nice to do those things, but come on they are human and we all have moments where the rage and anger is too much that we lash out in mean ways.
But i really enjoyed it and can't wait to see where Pam and Jim have gone too and what you are going to make them do next.
Author's Response:
now that you speak of that, i completley agree (: i just got through watching liscense to wed for my first time and i can see what you mean. like at the beginning ben seemed like an easygoing guy but he punched the revrend.
i'm going to actually add that (: