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Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 01:40 pm Title: ETA

I have been reading this off-and-on at work all day today and now you've got me completely hooked into this storyline.  I officially love/hate you right now.  Heh.  It really is a very engaging story and I love the contrast between the real-life Jim and Pam and the online Jim and Pam.  Update this soon.  I hate not knowing what's going to happen next!  Argh.

Reviewer: PokerChips Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 01:19 pm Title: ETA

This was another awesome instalment.

Each chapter makes me happy and this was nice after some really angsty stuff. 

 

Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 11:47 am Title: ETA

Okay, you redeemed yourself. thanks! loved the chapter!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 11:35 am Title: ETA

Sigh.  Thanks.  I feel better.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 11:24 am Title: ETA

Hmm... Jim is also passionate about chocolate/butterscotch chip cookies.  Yum.

Reviewer: kaywinnit Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 10:12 am Title: ETA

Thanks for fixing. Now I can go back to enjoying the warm glow of Pam & Jim being nicer to each other after the raw (but totally believeable) meanness of the previous chapter. :)

Reviewer: grapenutbeats Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 09:42 am Title: ETA

I also noticed the emails were the same (and saw you fixed it), but theoretically Jim wouldn't mind using his gmail with Pam because he doesn't know Pam is SweaterGirl, right?  But I'll forgive the lapse in realism for the sake of the story :)

Author's Response: That is very true, but I don't want Pam to figure things out...yet :)

Reviewer: czarag00 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 09:16 am Title: ETA

more more more!!! this story is so addicting!

Reviewer: kaywinnit Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 08:33 am Title: ETA

waitwaitwait--

jhalpert@gmail.com is the address Pam told TeamJim to create to pretend he was JIM. And they've emailed back and forth with him using that account. I guess it was to a different account of hers, but I can't help but feel like, when she's used to getting stuff from that account from TJ, which she clearly enjoys getting, she would be really likely to notice that this email is from that account.

Author's Response: AGH! You are right. I knew I'd slip up at some point. Going to change that NOW

Reviewer: alli817 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 08:09 am Title: CYA

Awesome! Can't wait to see what happens next! Are you going to follow the show or are you going to venture into AU?

Reviewer: Ayswen Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 07:50 am Title: CYA

This is completely awesome. i read all 10 chapters this morning! <3

Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 07:18 am Title: CYA

Hmm... I like this story, but I'm not sure I like this chapter. I've never seen Jim be so cruel! But, I did catch on that TJ and SG were going to send in comments.

 Question: Is this relationship Pam speaks of the one with TeamJim? lol.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 07:15 am Title: CYA

Great chapter.  Tense! 

Reviewer: officefreak Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 05:47 am Title: CYA

My heart was just BREAKING reading this! Great writing!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 05:37 am Title: CYA

Wow, GitC, I don't know how you could have made The Merger more angsty than it was, but holy smokes.  I hope there is some good Jam!love coming tomorrow night (on TV) to put out the flames.  SG & TJ's questions just crystallized all that was so, so wrong between Pam & Jim (or should I say PAM & JIM).  Ow, ow, ow...

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 03:42 am Title: CYA

All I can say is that it's a good thing you didn't write this last year, because I wouldn't have been able to read it.  It's still tough to read, even now.  But I will keep reading, since, like girl7, you promised us the happy. :)

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 03:39 am Title: CYA

Jesus, this was a vicious chapter! It's hard seeing them both so ice cold towards each other, but when it's all out in the open there, and everyone's pressing them for more answers, I guess nasty jabs are the best way to keep some self preservation. I wonder why Brian saved that line of Pam's?

Reviewer: StarShine Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 01:14 am Title: CYA

The only thing stopping me from crumbling into a sobbing heap on my floor is knowing that Jim and Pam are together now. And you promised some light to come. This is so brilliant. It feels like real people.. almost makes me feel guilty for laughing at the sobbing people on shows like the Bachelor. Almost.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 12:11 am Title: CYA

Oh it's so good and it's so painful! Continued excellent work!

Reviewer: grapenutbeats Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 23, 2007 11:59 pm Title: TTYL

I just started this story and I have to say, I love all of it!  I'm on the edge of my seat!

Reviewer: JamLover101 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23, 2007 10:58 pm Title: CYA

poor Brian

and Jim was kinda a jerk. But I still feel bad for him. 

Reviewer: grayk Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23, 2007 10:55 pm Title: CYA

woh dude jim was uber harsh... a great chapter, but i am just aching for pam here... please update soon!

Reviewer: PokerChips Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23, 2007 10:51 pm Title: CYA

Wow this was way more angsty than I was expecting but it was amazing beyond words.
I don't even know why but when i saw you posted this i had to read this chapter... when i should be working on a paper  due tomorrow.

I can't wait for the next chapter... more angst would be good so the (happy? smut filled?) ending will be a good payoff.

Reviewer: somethingsometime Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23, 2007 10:42 pm Title: TTYL

When I saw you’d updated I’m pretty sure I started hyperventilating.  Then I got to the end of the chapter and my heart stopped for a second, now I am resuscitated and ready for more.  Fantastic job!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23, 2007 08:18 pm Title: THX

This is such a twisty concept - I find myself occasionally getting confused by what they've seen and what they know and what other people know and what they're pretending not to know, but it's so, so good. I'm getting twitchy from all the lies, though, and hope one of them slips up soon! But for the time being it's nice seeing them being themselves with each other in that time in the way they couldn't be on the show to each other's faces.

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