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Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05, 2007 06:46 pm Title: Would You Care To Come Down For Fireworks Time ...

I like this chapter the best so far. It's great so is excepted so fast, and she's the first girl he brought home in awile. It's always nice to get a hug from the mom. And I'm so glad she's so comfortable with all of them too.

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05, 2007 06:45 pm Title: From Up and Down, And Still Somehow

Cute and fluffy. I like how you can tell so much with so few words. It gets you straight to the point. Very nice.

Reviewer: I_Still_Believe Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 05, 2007 08:37 am Title: Would You Care To Come Down For Fireworks Time ...

aw! this was so sweet! can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 05, 2007 06:44 am Title: Would You Care To Come Down For Fireworks Time ...

What a nice warm feeling--especially on this cold winter day.  Great chapter.  I really love this story.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 04, 2007 12:18 pm Title: From Up and Down, And Still Somehow

This was so simple and sweet.  Really, really good.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2007 02:25 pm Title: From Up and Down, And Still Somehow

Nice, moreperfecter.  Are you not counting The Dundies as Pam kissing Jim, though?

I like how you managed to say a lot in a small number of words. :) 

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