Date: November 05, 2007 09:57 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
ohh mannn! I love this story! I love all your stories, but I just love Squirrel McPants.. And I dont even want to know what the Dwight task is, haha.. Confronting him in the stairwell and telling him all about his love for Pam? maybe?
Author's Response: thanks for the review, AvilaGrace - glad you like it! Dwight's task will be Jim's hardest to date, that's for sure.....
Date: November 05, 2007 08:23 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Aww, I really liked learning more about Leikha/Lydia and I think it's a great idea to explore the lives of the other chatters. You're doing a great job fitting this story into the events of season four! It feels really natural. And "Who's Pam" at the end - LOL. Great stuff, as usual! :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks, sudzy! Having it fit in naturally with Season 4 has been the challenge - but it's made it fun! I'm so glad you think it's working.
RE: "Who's Pam?" - I couldn't resist! (Though I promise sholva is NOT Creed!!) ;-)
Date: November 05, 2007 08:08 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Amazing, Mox, as always! ;) I love that you're getting into the lives of the other chatters because I think we've all become so attached to these people that its really fun to have you fill in all the little details.
And I love that Dwight is a task. Totally fits with the current Jim/Pam/Dwight storyline. And the continuation of that scene on the roof was just genius. Basically this whole chapter was awesome, and I really hope Leikha gets everything she's been dreaming about. I'm kind of in her shoes a little bit these days, and it's really hard to go after what you want at the expense of practical things like money, and parental approval, but I guess it's something that everyone needs to do at some point in their lives, right?
Okay, sorry for the epistle! Thanks for an incredibly cool chapter! ;)
Author's Response: Epistle away, Azlin - I love to hear what you think about the story. :-) Thanks for taking the time to comment!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 07:59 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Funny and fantastic as always. Can't wait for the next chapter! I especially liked the ending.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words, abs294! I'm so glad you have enjoyed it thus far. :-)
Date: November 05, 2007 06:21 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Wow. Just wow. I love how you've constructed the backstory for Lydia/Leikha and how it relates to Jim 'balls of titanium'. And how Jim gave her an unknowing nudge to go after her dreams.
Also loved how you tied it into the episode and my mind is racing at the foreshadowing to Money & Local Ad. Nice job, Mox!
Author's Response:
Ah, Money... shall I tackle the tale of the pushed-together beds? ;-)
So glad you liked it, Lisa - you know I love praise from you!! :-D
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 04:33 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
I love the new approach on this one! Showing how Jim's decision had an impact on others, very cool. And your tale on the rooftop scene was so sweet! All in all, amazing chapter! Oh, and perfect ending line: "Who's Pam??" haha, love it!
Author's Response: Thank you, ISB - I was playing with the roof scene for a little bit, making sure it flowed believably from the snippet we saw on the screen. I'm so glad you thought it worked! :-)
Date: November 05, 2007 03:33 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Aww...so that's why we got the Rooftop Redux, it was part of a task. So sweet. I love how we're learning about the other chatters too.
I don't know how you're doing this Mox, and NaNo too, and all the rest of the stuff in your life. You're really amazing!
Author's Response:
Yeah, don't you like how I make it look like the show is bending to *my* version of Jam reality?? :-) (And don't tell anyone but I haven't done squat with NaNo yet - looks like a few longs nights for me this month!!)
Thanks for the review, dear - I'm so glad you liked it.
Date: November 04, 2007 11:59 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
love this story.
Author's Response: thank you so much!
10 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 11:47 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
You are awesome. And fantastic. And need to update this more often.
Author's Response: I shall do my best, HM! I do have NaNoWriMo this month, but my heart is never far from Squirrel. Thanks for the review. :)