Date: January 05, 2008 01:46 am Title: First Kiss
I went back and finished reading your story (real life must have gotten in the way at the time you were updating). I really love the innocence of this story. And this part... He sat down on a rock overhanging a small spring, letting his feet dangle close to the silent water seeping from the earth below. The tree frogs were still chirping in the distance...Jim had always loved that sound...that transported me back to my childhood. Only the frogs were in the pond. Man, I miss the sound of frogs at night. I used to go out and find a place to sit and stare at the water and think...I could lose a lot of time that way. Anyhow, very nicely done!
Date: October 21, 2007 06:13 pm Title: First Kiss
This is really cute. I love the way you sneak in characters similair to those at DM!
Date: October 21, 2007 11:46 am Title: First Kiss
aw Poor Jim :(
Kids can be so mean sometimes. I'm intrigued, hope you continue.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind comment. I've got a lot in my head right now and hopefully I'll update quicker than a week this time.
And I agree...kids are jerks. Also, most adults are too. Have a nice day, and thanks for reading! :)
9 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2007 10:44 am Title: First Kiss
I enjoyed the story of young Jim's first crush a lot. Very sweet and touching with the right amoung of angst added to the mix. Young love, how do we ever survive it?
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it so far!