Reviews For A Long Day
Reviewer: Dwangie Signed 
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Date: October 06, 2008 06:42 pm Title: No Idea
9 [Report This]Date: October 06, 2008 06:42 pm Title: No Idea
It really is so good!
"probably banned from seeing your daughter because you sold crack to her friends or something" is my favorite line!
great work!
Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2007 10:49 am Title: No Idea
Date: October 30, 2007 10:49 am Title: No Idea
Oh dear lord. I really like the split shower idea and Michael's desperate attempt to keep things fun.
Did you use a beta for this story? They can really help you clean up minor spelling and grammar issues and other typos. I'd be happy to assist if you need one.
Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2007 03:20 pm Title: No Idea
Date: October 22, 2007 03:20 pm Title: No Idea
oh my gosh that is awful! do you really think Toby would be that evil? ouch.
Reviewer: PokerChips Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16, 2007 02:53 pm Title: No Idea
Date: October 16, 2007 02:53 pm Title: No Idea
Oh I can't wait for chapter 3. I wonder how they are going to contact Jim. I know that this is going to get interesting.