10 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2008 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
"you’ll be a million floorboard squeaks away from her" was my favorite line. i loved it all! amazing composition!!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2008 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
"you’ll be a million floorboard squeaks away from her" was my favorite line. i loved it all! amazing composition!!!
Date: June 27, 2008 12:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww that was lovely :) :) :)(i hope this satisfies your request to leave some love!) Oh and your imagery is fantastic; very poetic and vivid.
Author's Response: Yes, it definitely suffices :) Thank you!
9 [Report This]Date: October 26, 2007 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, how cute. :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
9 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2007 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
love it!
I love the way you write :P
Author's Response: Aww, thanks!
Date: October 19, 2007 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
I do wanna leave some love! Because that was quite touching and I really love it when my fic has some heart :)
Author's Response: Yay "touching". Wait... TWSS. Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
Date: October 19, 2007 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautifully written.
Here's to a JAM filled year :)
Author's Response: Hear hear! Thanks for reading!
Date: October 17, 2007 11:16 am Title: Chapter 1
This made me smile - and I had a rough day yesterday so I really needed it. Thank you for giving us such a lovely glimpse of what is yet to come. :)
Author's Response: Aww, I hope your week has been better :) Thanks, I'm glad it helped!
Date: October 17, 2007 08:20 am Title: Chapter 1
so beautiful -- they should have started dating ye---, er, a long time ago.
Author's Response: lol! I've always wondered why he interrupted himself... Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2007 06:36 am Title: Chapter 1
This has such a great romantic feel. So good. Loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2007 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't know what it is about this style of writing that just makes me melt into a puddle of goo, but that's exactly what it does. So very sweet!
Author's Response: Puddle of goo, that sounds serious ;) Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: October 16, 2007 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
You are correct. I DO want to leave you some love. Because you wrote the love so nice for us. :)
Excellent job on this. It was visual and eloquent, and I loved it.
Author's Response: It was my pleasure :) Thank you!
Date: October 16, 2007 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
i know what i love, and i love this fic. it's amazingly sweet with so many lovely moments. happiness.
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2007 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
You rake her leaves just so you can jump in them and feel her close against you and try not the think how in twelve hours you’ll be a million floorboard squeaks away from her, yet just down the hall.
So perfect.
Author's Response: Thanks! I agree. Even though I think they'll have some trouble eventually (because this is TV and stuff like that happens), they = long haul for me as well.
8 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2007 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
"It’s the feeling as if you could die in this instant and be content because then it would always be just like now, if you weren’t so sure it would stay this perfect anyway." Beautiful line. This was lovely.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you!
Date: October 16, 2007 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aaaahh! This is the kind of fanfiction I love to read. I hope you've written more than this; I'm off to check right now.
Author's Response: Thanks! I did write something recently from Pam's POV called Catch Me When I Fall that is similar. Does that help? Or am I just shamelessly plugging my other writing? lol
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2007 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was so sweet! the ending made me tear up a little.
oh, and i loved this:
"It’s rediscovering how you fit, pieces from the same puzzle and her edges making up for your gaps and vice versa."
Author's Response: Aww, tears! Thank you so much!