1 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2023 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww so beautiful. Their hug is so sweet. And Jim finally got to hear Pam laugh.
1 [Report This]Date: August 29, 2020 09:28 am Title: Chapter 1
I *love* the detail of the reference to Booze Cruise. Looking forward to seeing what you come up with next!
9 [Report This]Date: March 20, 2016 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hahaha. That comment from Jim was ... perfect.
Date: November 05, 2007 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I completely agree with your hug decision. It perfectly illustrates their need for each other--as friends first and foremost, and then as something more. Excellent choice!
10 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2007 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
woo!!! this is awesome & lovely!! I can't believe this is your first one! definitely no phail, ANGST or anything of the sort =) I'm weird...but you already know that. <3
Date: October 17, 2007 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love it !
really. (: is there more ?!
Date: October 17, 2007 10:49 am Title: Chapter 1
This was lovely. A very sweet take on what we didn't see. Your characterization is really good. If this is your first attempt it's proof that you should keep writing. :)
Date: October 17, 2007 07:05 am Title: Chapter 1
I like the hug. It doesn't overdo it too soon. It's tentative, but it's also warm and familiar. It's very Jim and Pam.
Good job! Keep going!
9 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2007 06:13 am Title: Chapter 1
So sweet. Good job!
Date: October 17, 2007 06:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Hug is definitely more appropriate for this scenario. Can't wait to read more
10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2007 05:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw, this story was perfect! And the hug with the kiss on the head was definately the right choice! I think you need to continue this into a full first date fic! please? lol
10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2007 05:36 am Title: Chapter 1
be gentle?!? OMG that was so great. UGH. I definitely got butterflies in my stomach at the end. So cute with them hugging because it just perfectly said something, idk, that they had made it through something without even needing to say it. The hug was PERFECT. Excellent job, great first fic ;-) Also, you didn't mark the complete button I see...does that mean there's more on the way??
Date: October 16, 2007 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was really cute! I love the note the best ;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2007 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooooh! I love this one SO much! Excellent job. If you were a real person and this wasn't a computer screen I would air-high-5 you!
Really impressive stuff, especially for a first go. I love the hug - seems more genuine than a kiss.
More chapters? Please?
Date: October 16, 2007 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
kisses are good, but when you eally think about it, hugs are just a tnsy bit better.
8 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2007 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
The hug was perfect. Like starting all over again from the time of the merger. Very impressive for you first fanfic.
Date: October 16, 2007 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love it. i definitely like the hug because this is before all the questions are answered and everything is easy. but it's still loving and sweet. anyway, there are a lot of things i like about this like the attention to detail and his desire to make this special but make her laugh. it's a GREAT first fic!!!
Date: October 16, 2007 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
The hug was perfect! I think you made the right choice. This story is so sweet and so JAM. Nicely done!
Date: October 16, 2007 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved it. I truly did. Great job. My heart skipped a beat when I read this line:
Upon seeing him a huge smile spread across her face, which made him grin, as it always did. He loved her. Everything about her.
THAT made me grin. This was a nice little look in to the before and after of Jim's "it's a date". Well done!